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by Anonymous

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by kokshur09/17/11

a woman's view

this one is similar and based on another poem i left on this site. this one however is told from a different point of view. i hope you will all like it.

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by RhymeFairy09/19/11

Nice ..

I like your imagery and very nice flow here ~

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