The Crazy Ex

Aww

A baby! Great story.

Sexy Story

This story was really hot. The characters were believable and sexy. Keep up the good work.

More please

You need to write a sequel and soon.... very soon. Will be waiting.! Hopefully!

Heared

I was on fire reading this story. I need a second entry of this one. Both of them was hot. Mmmm.... Yummy

Interesting

His ex was a psycho!!! It's only sexy when it's written. If it was real life, I would honestly be scared. LOL. Only in my dreams would this be erotic.

AT LEAST THERE WASNT A SHOWER STALL SCENE

BUT THE BEDROOM SCENE WAS BAD ENOUGH. TK U MLJ LV NV

great

great story! please write more

Well...

I can think of worse things I could be tied down and forced to do. That was pretty damn sexy.

Damm ! I thought it was just me.

Don't you just hate ( to love) it when sexy but psycho , big titted ex gfs tie me down and ride us like a stolen bike. Stealing my man-seed should be a felony .Great scary/ sexy dialogue btw from Crazy girl - rang all too authentic.

Simpy Awesome........

Lucky (and unlucky) at the same time........great dude

My own fantasy

Wow this really turns me on...i wanted to do this to my ex boyfriend

So Hot

I want a girl to do this to me.

Run Jack, run as fast as you can.
She is perfect scarry.

SWAG

Shit just got real lol

Continue this one

One of my favorite fantasies, which could actually happen. I wanna read more of this.

is it weird?

why am i so turned on by crazy girls? whatever, hot is hot. this is hot.

Awesome

Plz keep writing!

Quite incredible crazy love

Love is crazy no matter how extreme. The story is so well written it became entertaining. Without the bondage I've lived this scene. The primal nature of coupling is overwhelming to logic and rational thinking eventually the mind follows. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and this author's style. I'm not an advocate of fatal attractions but I think love is crazy maybe not as pronounced as this story purports. I've been there after a night out with the guys an unplanned encounter with the ex or almost ex and bam!! The head doesn't sync with the little head and there comes my first daughter shortly after the hug that evolves from an apparent ambush. Thank you author the story begs for continuation!

To jail

That's the only place she's going - for along time and deservedly so. What a crock.

Two possibilites come to mind

Find her and force her to take a morning after pill. Just to be safe. It's not certain she is going to get pregnant the first time out. People try for extended periods of time before it happens. And if she does get pregnant? Pack up everything and move across country. All done. Problem solved.

Well that was just dumb

And the dialogue was terrible.

mmm

EROTIC....MORE...!!

Well that was bad

Poorly thought out, poorly executed and just horrible dialogue.

shitty

This story was horrible. Don't waste ur time

When she came back to his place later?

He was gone. Everything was gone down to the floors. He had moved away and taken everything. She never found him. The end.

After the word 'No!', it's rape....

SbE, you wrote a cleverly malicious tale of non-consensual sex. Now how in the hell does Jack the Lad prove it? And all that nonsense from commentators urging him to flee. At least here in the USofA, and probably most of the rest of the Britamerican language speaking world, there ain't no where to run.

A fugitive would have to live entirely off the grid. Never get stopped by the police or transit security. Never get seriously ill or injured. Never fill out a job application or any need for a credit check or request public assistance. Do not collect tax refunds. Do not pass any CTV system with facial recognition applications. Do not leave fingerprints or DNA to be processed through the identity databases.

As for our boy Jack, he needs to finally get honest with himself and stop pretending that he can go through life as a carelessly carefree jerk. Remaining a perpetual adolescent blithely fucking girls right and left. Without any intent to grow up and become a man and accept a man's responsibility for the consequences of his actions.

Now, he's whining that the woman treated him as badly as he has treated females.

The Bitch! Acting as though she were a male entitled to abuse females.

To fanfare

Say what?!? He had a controlling bitch of a girlfriend. I have told girls to flee lunatics of the male persuasion who were control freaks too. As for fleeing. Extradition only works for criminal cases. Get out of the country and you're free.

How are they going to be together forever?

She's going to jail for assault, battery and rape. Even if she's pregnant (which was unlikely) he wouldn't have to support her or the child. In Court, with his DNA all over the handcuffs, she goes to jail and he fades away. She's toast. Dumb story.

In real life, everyone loses. In a fantasy story ...

It's just fucking hot! Nice job! Thanks!

Funny story...

It wouldn't be too hard for him to destroy her but I'm sure it would be cathartic.

Rape?

Fucked to orgasm against his will. The penis is a traitor!

Really?

She's gonna get pregnant the first time? And he's not going to leave her anyway? What happens when he takes a new job across the country? What happens if he has her arrested? Did you bother to think this through? What a mess.

Hehehe, entertaining! Fast-forward ninteen years, his drop dead gorgeous daughter is a red headed little nymphomaniac for her daddy and his cock, and he is about to find out! Momma is going to get some stiff competition ;)