I like the use of second person for this kind of stuff. It's honest and organic, and it really lets the reader know that this is the stuff that turns you on. Fantastic, honest fantasy. Would like to be that stranger ;)
This was my first submission.....in more ways than one! Thank you for being so nice!
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Good Honest Fantasy
I like the use of second person for this kind of stuff. It's honest and organic, and it really lets the reader know that this is the stuff that turns you on. Fantastic, honest fantasy. Would like to be that stranger ;)
This was my first submission.....in more ways than one! Thank you for being so nice!
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