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Too short!
I know, I know. I'm sure it's difficult to write excellent stories like this in a quick timeframe, but these chapters are just way too short in my opinion. I'd rather wait 2 or 3 months for 5 pages of this excellent story, than 1 month for 1 measly page!
Sorry. You really are an excellent writer, I guess I'm just impatient. Keep up the great work. :)
DB
Ugh!! You're a tease!!
Too short - I 'm greedy I want more and I want it now! Keep up the great work. (Hot picture by the way ;)
You did it again!!
Another chapter where you answered the plot-changing question of the last chapter and presented another one! GREAT story!! But you are still a stinker! HEHEHAAHAA!! Keep up the great story! Like it bunches!
Keep going
Your doing an awesome job with the plots. I cant wait to see if the parents had something to do with the daughters death.
Read this all in one day.
Good story
Chapter 10 is coming soon!
I know it's been a while since I posted this chapter, but I stopped for a little while to write a few other things. Chapter 10 is about halfway finished right now, and will hopefully be done and submitted in the next couple weeks. Thank you for reading!
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