All Comments on 'Kenny Ch. 03'

by sagacious21

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Too short

It's a good story but this one page a day is getting old. Save up a few chapters and submit them as a longer format.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 12 years ago
Nice.

How come I have the feeling that Kenny is going to end up with Consuela? I'll keep reading to find out.

68dawg68dawgover 12 years ago
Socially_Inept: It's called...

Five-shadowing: one step beyond fore-shadowing.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
5-*, based on potential

This has the makings of a good story, but the chapters are abruptly short. Nice plot, but too brief.

stealthgundamstealthgundamover 12 years ago
great start

i have enjoyed your series up into this point, but i think you should submit longer stories as opposed to single page entries.

sagacious21sagacious21over 12 years agoAuthor
I have heard you.

The short chapters are over, two at a time from now on.

estragonestragonover 12 years ago

Sagacious, I like it, and it's got great potential (especially for mix-and-match; four ladies and one man is a great combination), but ol' Kenny had better get online and order an extra helping of Cialis.

I think we've had enough build-up. Time to get things started--and I don't mean the Muppet Show.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
MOVING IN BEGINS

a new life and way of life for all. TK U MLJ LV NV

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