by sagacious21
It's a good story but this one page a day is getting old. Save up a few chapters and submit them as a longer format.
How come I have the feeling that Kenny is going to end up with Consuela? I'll keep reading to find out.
Five-shadowing: one step beyond fore-shadowing.
This has the makings of a good story, but the chapters are abruptly short. Nice plot, but too brief.
i have enjoyed your series up into this point, but i think you should submit longer stories as opposed to single page entries.
The short chapters are over, two at a time from now on.
Sagacious, I like it, and it's got great potential (especially for mix-and-match; four ladies and one man is a great combination), but ol' Kenny had better get online and order an extra helping of Cialis.
I think we've had enough build-up. Time to get things started--and I don't mean the Muppet Show.