by luckyhusband5
I like the story, but you need to fix the continuity problem with the panties. She is not wearing any and then suddenly she has some on. Also, there are a couple of spelling mistakes.
Suzan might seem especially brazen to some readers but the truth is there are LOTS f women out there exactly like her.....we LOVE to fuck and we will do ANYthing that a Man.....or Men.....with BIG dicks tell us to do. Big dicks on aggressive Men can do anything They want to us. Anything.
For what reason does this bastard brutalize this willing and attractive woman? It's a shame there wasn't someone there to deck his ass.