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by Anonymous

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by Thor9909/24/11

Amazing!!

I await to see what other woodland fairies he can encounter before the series end!!

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by PhoenixCodes11/17/11

A limb

I'm going to go out on a limb (pardon the pun), and say that any time you say 'boobs', changing it to 'breasts' instead could be beneficial to the way the story reads.

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