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by knarf8207709/25/11

good story...

The content was great and very stimulating, but I would recommend working on the writing style. The sentences ran on too long and it was somewhat distracting. Keep writing and working at it!

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by Anonymous09/25/11

the names...

pete and roger, all i could think of was the who, lol

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by Anonymous09/25/11

And to top it off, you fucked up the title!

What a joke!

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