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by alexcarr

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knarf82077knarf82077over 12 years ago
good story...

The content was great and very stimulating, but I would recommend working on the writing style. The sentences ran on too long and it was somewhat distracting. Keep writing and working at it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
the names...

pete and roger, all i could think of was the who, lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
And to top it off, you fucked up the title!

What a joke!

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