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Disney Delight

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by Anonymous

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by Harddaysknight09/25/11

Does anyone besides me have a wife smaller than DD's?

What is the need for so many writers to describe a woman by her bra size? Or a man by the size of his cock? Does every married man in the world have a wife with double D's except me? Damn it, tell me it ain't so!

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by jomomma14109/25/11

its true

Sorry, but she really does have double d's.....it's so!

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It seems so

Sorry, HDK... Mrs Haversackers wears a 34DD bra, too. However, I agree with your comment. Too many writers expend too many words describing their characters "assets" when it's really not relevant to the story. It's simply become part of the Literotica Loving Wives "format".

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by katib09/25/11

Plus & Minus

Lots of description, which is nice; but no tension or emotion, which is not so good in a short story.

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by LordSlamdawgg09/26/11

The only remarkable thing about this story is why go to Disneyland as a childless couple ?

Trust me. Once you have them , you'll see all you want of the joint and then some.

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by Erotonaut09/26/11

Decent description, clunky dialogue

Sorry, but some of these lines could have been delivered by a speak-your-weight machine. You need to introduce a higher level of informality and intimacy: after all, Joe and Janet have been married for six years, the girls have a sexual past and two of the three already know the vacation will include a threesome.

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by Alberta Al09/26/11

DDs

My wife has DDs and they are natural. But she also has a big ass and a belly.

I agree with HDK. "gloriously big tits, as firm as when she bought them" or "wonderful, soft breasts, big enough to smother me" would be better descriptions than "36DD".

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by Anonymous12/12/13

Horrible

Enough said.

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by dirtyoman08/07/14

Sorry "Anon"

"Mr Anon" doesn't like this but I DO!!! You get a big 5 for this hot fucking story!!! I very seldom give a 5 but this story is soooo Hot, I couldn't whack off fast enough!! I hope Gloria stays with you guys awhile, & rewards you for being such a nice guy!!lol

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