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by Anonymous

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by chytown09/27/11

You write ok.

But this is a rape story. Wrong section.

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by LordSlamdawgg09/27/11

Dad schould have taught son how to properly mistreat a woman !

Good story. Thx for sharing.

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by Anonymous09/27/11

ignore category police

Could have gone in several categories but that isn't the problem with the story.

What we don't have is someone to care about or cheer for in this tale. As part of a larger story this might work better.

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by digdaddyrich09/27/11

A great story

I really liked the twist at the end, and how she submitted herself to her father in law.

Thanks for the good read.

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by Anonymous09/27/11

Go to the office supply store...

and buy yourself a giant box of periods! Seriously, there needs to be more than one sentence per paragraph...

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by bigguy32309/27/11

You can't rape the willing. And, the cunt was willing.

Z

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by impo_5808/25/14

Family...

What a father, what a wife....better be orphan and single....A father like this should die the day his son is born....

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