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Not even worth commenting on
Fuck you and the stupid ass writer, I'm normally not a hater but fuck you and the writer your both fucking morons
I GUESS YOU COULD DO MORE TO HIM
as all forms of sado-mascho suits him to a T. TK U MLJ LV NV
wow
I gotta say, you must really hate yourself if pretty much all your stories are like this one, judging by the titles and descriptions. It almost goes without saying though, but "why bother?". Just the first two paragraphs are painful to read, much less doing a skim over the rest of the 'story'. The only good point of this is that it's so short.
Sooo.....
Was there some part of this story that the reader was actually expected to like?????
Is there more to come??
I can't say this is a good story by itself. If it is a preamble to something more, then fine. I'll save any comments until I see other chapters. If there are no other chapters, I'm guessing this was just an exercise for the author.... possibly assigned by someone else.
3 stars.
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