Loreley Island Ch. 01

ooohhh, good start

now keep it going!!!

Good start...

Just too short. Not story to really get a feel for anything just yet. But it should still be interesting to see what happens and find out just what Stella is, though I have a good idea.

Thanks so much Gemini_Knight and stealthgundam. I agree, Gemini_Knight, it is a bit short. But things will develop more in chapter 2, "The Castle". This is my first 'erotic' tale, so I guess I wanted to keep it on the brief side.

keep writing

Like the story hope you write more chapters of it

working on it

I do have the next chapter close to done. I hope to post it soon. :)

Thanks for the comment.

want more!

I liked it I want to read more soon!