All Comments on 'The road before me'

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Maria2394Maria2394over 12 years ago
I loved it :)

and your sneaky "little" device- "peek" rather than peak, as in a mountain peak, was valuable to me, as a reader. I took a lot from this poem and I am sure I will read it again. In this line, I would lose the "the"-----(along the narrow ridges)

enjoyed the read-

~ m

p.s., I tried to vote, but my vote would not register, but it would have been a 5. I will try again later.

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