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WOW!
This story is one of the best i have read long enough to get stuck into but short enough it doesnt get boring i love the detail u have put into all of these storys including the pro-logue. Kepp up the good work :)
Thanks
Thank you, I really appreciate the private and public comments I've gotten in very short order. It's both encouraging, and gratifying. Chapter 3 is in the works.
Batteries
you write a story like this and me w/o batteries to play along. This is a hot story that I will continue to read to it's end. I also look forward to reading whatever else you might write. You are a talented writer and it shows thru in the details of you story.
I wish you much continued success!
nicely done!
This is everything I'd hope for in a literotica story but get so infrequently: literate, hot, likable characters - and well-paced! The only less-than-realistic part, for me, was that given her age, Chantelle's naïvité (or at least the delivery of some of her lines) didn't feel entirely credible - but it still works for the story so I went with it. It's refreshing to see a male character who seems to genuinely like women *and* know what he's talking about - and how to write about it. Given the nature of the story, don't know that I need to see them shag, but definitely looking forward to more, thx!
(:
I told you the story was good! Glad I'm not the only one who enjoyed it.
xoxo,
Andrea
Great story! Thanks, and keep it up!
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