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Kenny Ch. 08-09

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by Anonymous

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by BigJohn60109/29/11

Well this chapter was a bit of a let down but ....

Kenny got his daughter back and his prospects for a future love life look good. Still a very interesting story.

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by Socially_Inept09/29/11

LET DOWN??!!

I don't know how this chapter was a let down. Everything is going at a steady pace. I'm glad Ken has temporary custody of his daughter (I hope he gets to keep her.) I will patiently wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous09/29/11

Fan

Great story. I enjoyed the segment even if these people don't agree. Not so patiently waiting.

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by Anonymous09/30/11

Hm,

I can understand what the thinking about 'let down' is about, great opportunities left behind here. But then again this IS listed under romance and not some other category.

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by tazz31710/21/11

SAFETY AND PROTECTION FIRST

no matter the price or cost to aid family and real friends. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous06/03/15

Too Bad

The story lost me right here...
"Yes, Walter, I think I can. Please call me Marcia, Walter; I believe that I would like to get to know you a little better. Are you or your brother married?"

If this is a story about sisters Marcia Friedman and Marta Horne then we shouldn't have been focused so much on Ken.

If this is a story about Kenny, the overly convenient sudden appearance of of twins to take up with the sisters isn't necessary nor is it helpful to the story. Them magically appearing right after Ken says he's feeling used ruptures suspension of disbelief. Wrapping up every supporting character's romantic life just because the main character's romantic life is coming together is bad storytelling. Give us sequels if you can't stand leaving a supporting character without a romantic attachment, or at the very worst roll up the supporting characters romantic lives into a few words in the epilogue.

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