Naughty Siblings

Details are important

Pretty good story, but don't forget details. The story starts out telling what happened last night and ends with "we have not spoken of it since that night". So you have not spoken of this since last night?

The pleasing factor was nice

Minimal seduction factor as mentioned by previous commentator. The author" said" she wanted to tease her brother but he didn't have to work too hard to " get some"

. This is like fast food sex- no frills. It will get you through the day but can get wearisome in quick hurry. Maybe I'm judging too harshly due to high expectations because the author had written stories that throw off serious heat.

I swear...!

I'd bet a bundle that this is a true tale . So honestly written and complete with few words . Well done .

rushed

way to rushed give more detail and background info. this reads like it should be chapter two or three not one.

Spot on :-)

I liked that a lot.

Damned realistic and "do-able". No overuse of profanity for the sake of it, or multiple different names for sex organs.

A winner, for sure, ty.

excellent

Need Chapters 2, 3, & 4

Loved It

Noticed theres a lot of critisism on this site. After all, it is an amateur writing site ? Anyway, well done loved the story. Keep up the good work, dont listen to the creatins that put you down. Like to see them write a story :)

Great story need more!!

That was a great story I had a hard on the whole time, no you need to continue the story with them still fucking each other and then having her getting pregnant with her brothers baby or babies :)

Loved the story (duit4meplz@yahoo.com)

I also would love to read more chapters of these two. Have you ever made it with your brother?

It's a shame that it wasn't the start of a very long sexual love affair.

It would have been so sweet if they continued loving each other, and became a couple.

Sharing each other's bodies and giving the other a new sexual bliss.

A deeper love that they never experienced with any person before.

Only with each other did they feel the closeness that they shared that night.

Thanks for the good read.

What a surprise! What happened between me and my younger sister is told by you darling!!! Oh! What a unforgettable and most enjoyable happening was that!

hello sophie

Hi. Saw your post on Lit Chat a little while ago and enjoyed your story. Was happy to see you have written a nice assortment of stories that I will be reading in the future .I grew up with an older brother as latch kids with lots of afternoon time alone. You rang a bell. Looking forward to reading more of your stories love wendy g

WOWWWWWWWWW

I read storys like this on here & wish i had had a sister dam it all i had was one brother dam it i fell like i got screwed out of some thing here dam it. Iwished i had , had a sister to make out with some people is just lucky i guess.

Liked your style

I like a story that does not drag on . Grown people know what they want , we don't need to know what they wore to work that day or had for lunch . I love the way you developed this story and brought it to fullness , I intend to read some more .

short and sweet!

Sometimes we all just need a quickie like these siblings! Great short, but sexy story! However, you did stir some forgotten memories, too!