It was a short story but it was really good. Please write more.
"It was the first time she'd spoken all night....". Really? Then who said "Damn, what a mess?"
Don't examine this too closely.
With a look that said what a mess
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good story
It was a short story but it was really good. Please write more.
consistency error
"It was the first time she'd spoken all night....". Really? Then who said "Damn, what a mess?"
Bellisario's Maxim
Don't examine this too closely.
With a look that said what a mess
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