Just a few comments. A lot of little word flubs in this one.... typos, if you will. I'm not a big fan of "switches" but that's not for Me to criticize. I'm guessing that Paul had to already know her type or how could He have gotten someone so quick. Only semi-believable if that is not the case. Good story though, or should I say good telling of real time events.
4 stars.
By this point, Nitro, Paul knew/knows my type pretty well. That's the benefit of talking when we play on line. He sees what I respond to, so while he sets things up.... he is aiming for my pleasure.
I've never really thought of myself as a switch but I guess I could see how exciting it could be to have a powerful role as a one off. Nice descriptions, but hard to imagine Paul finding a man so close to your 'perfect man' who was also interested in being submissive.
As always, I like your story time. A big turn-on for me are blindfolds and corsets, yummie!
But what about your time with a woman, guys want to know.
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Anonymous12/04/12
Fantastic story
Loved the series. Read right through in one sitting, quite easily. You have a "chatty" writing style, like we're sitting over a glass of good red wine conversing about your wonderful submissive experiences. I like that, makes for a very enjoyable read. Well done.
I'd like to have a sexy submissive woman like you. I had one once, but I let her slip through my fingers. I will read your other stories, and I'm sure they are as exciting as this series has been. Keep up this relaxed chatty style.
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a few
Just a few comments. A lot of little word flubs in this one.... typos, if you will. I'm not a big fan of "switches" but that's not for Me to criticize. I'm guessing that Paul had to already know her type or how could He have gotten someone so quick. Only semi-believable if that is not the case. Good story though, or should I say good telling of real time events.
4 stars.
By now
By this point, Nitro, Paul knew/knows my type pretty well. That's the benefit of talking when we play on line. He sees what I respond to, so while he sets things up.... he is aiming for my pleasure.
Interesting
I've never really thought of myself as a switch but I guess I could see how exciting it could be to have a powerful role as a one off. Nice descriptions, but hard to imagine Paul finding a man so close to your 'perfect man' who was also interested in being submissive.
As always, I like your story time. A big turn-on for me are blindfolds and corsets, yummie!
But what about your time with a woman, guys want to know.
Fantastic story
Loved the series. Read right through in one sitting, quite easily. You have a "chatty" writing style, like we're sitting over a glass of good red wine conversing about your wonderful submissive experiences. I like that, makes for a very enjoyable read. Well done.
I'd like to have a sexy submissive woman like you. I had one once, but I let her slip through my fingers. I will read your other stories, and I'm sure they are as exciting as this series has been. Keep up this relaxed chatty style.
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