I am not a fan of critical comments on the public boards. I believe criticism should be constructive and offered privately to the author. That much said, I genuinely enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing it.
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Anonymous12/23/11
hmmmmm
It was a good story, up until the dream stuff. In my opinion, if you had left that out, pitt at least not actually wrote 'omg', it would've been far more enjoyable.
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Tough crowd, but I enjoyed it!!
I am not a fan of critical comments on the public boards. I believe criticism should be constructive and offered privately to the author. That much said, I genuinely enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing it.
hmmmmm
It was a good story, up until the dream stuff. In my opinion, if you had left that out, pitt at least not actually wrote 'omg', it would've been far more enjoyable.
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