All Comments on 'Compulsions Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
SO HOT

This is by far one of the best stories i've read in awhile.Please continue!

Gemini1766Gemini1766over 12 years ago
What an ending!

You could end this story right here, a cliff-hanger and let imaginations take it to their own conclusions. Jim's mother and sister coming in was great, and the very different responses from them both are just right.

Looking forward to more of your work. Just remember that repetition, in excess, can become a drag. You're creative enough, use that imagination and keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great job

So far this is an amazing story, and i love how you arent relying solely on mikes power, i can see how its going to influence future installments, but so far its more of a backdrop for a wild orgy of emotions

KEEP WRITING GREAT STORIES

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story

Seems like the story is really coming together and look forward to further installments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Storyline

I like the storyline; interesting characters, nice build up of all - at least the main players - look forward to further installments soon.

Wondering if Julie will ever be able to get her fingers out of her pussy. Now that is going to be one horny little bitch after being denied orgasm until he returns.

Like to see Abby developed into more with Mike's family, etc.

I like keep it coming Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well done well done well done,so good keep it up ,i was late for work because i just could'nt stop reading ha ha ha

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Continue

Please continue the series, they are REALLY good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

MAKE MORE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great series

Please continue,this is a great series can't wait to see what happens next.Hope to read more soon!

ValerionValerionalmost 12 years ago
AWWW...where's the rest?

You can't leave us hanging like that! We need more!

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilover 11 years ago
More?

I am with those asking you for more this arc seems to have a fine run but you set up too many other threads not to explore them.

Who is this Rose? What other controllers are there out there and what are they up to?

Please! Let us know more about this world you are creating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Stuff!

It's good to read a story that can turn you on and have you laughing at the same time!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

I REALLY hope you continue your Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Not quite there

Hated all the sharing in your story. It would have been much better without it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Need more to it the stori must go on!!

I think Joan should b bac in story where he takes over her completely!! Where takes control of her property n Also fucks her while he calls for robin n Sam! He can suprise them with having Joan under control! U could hav them get revenge over Joan where she gets humiliated etc etc

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 11 years ago
What about the Mistress

with Karen Knox and the Mistress in the background. something is bound to come between them esp if Mike takes Karen and displeases the Mistress plus Mr. Winters has to go. so Mike can have a House for his Harem.

hotrod26808hotrod26808over 10 years ago
Enemy?

it feels as if the mistress had something to do with his mom's dad and her husband death

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

You are one sick fucking bastard. You ought to be locked up in isolation for the rest of your miserable fucking life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A

Go fuck your self with a black dill do it was AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME and more AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

When might we get new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

yes more chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please

More chapters......

vladdracul85vladdracul85about 9 years ago
fuck yeah

way more chapters you amazing writer you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more

More chapters

I really m eager to see whats next

Viper_Strikes_RKOViper_Strikes_RKOover 8 years ago
More

Hey this is heating up, please write more... I want to know more about Rose and Captain Knox and what their plans are. I also would love to see Rose take Jennifer into her power and away from Mike.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great story

I really liked this story and would love to read more in this story line im serious your really creative I was hanging on every word

Maitre1962Maitre1962about 8 years ago
Good Stuff!!!

I hope, you continue this story! Excellent story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome

I would like if you continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Continue the story

I would love to see Mike take control of Capt Knox.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you!

....for not continuing this adolescent minded story written for adolescent minded fans.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

Please please continue that story coz its 1 of the best keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
we need more

Please come back and add more to this great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sorry, but

Good story except for the sharing/group sex. Just my personal taste. Others seem to like it though. What happened to Abby???

Brandon11Brandon11about 4 years ago
Wow

Awesome story please keep it going I want to read more.

Tonyusmc3051Tonyusmc3051over 3 years ago
Hahahahahahaha

I jumped out of my chair when they came in. Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha that was a great ending!!!!!!!!!!! I added it so I will know when the next update is released. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Interesting story, but no anal.

NO male if given that opportunity would fail to fuck his submissive women up the arse.

Wouldn't happen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You lost me when Mike spit blood in Kay's face and Jim fuck-bashed Joy's head against the wall. Glad there is no next part, this is too stupid.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 1 year ago

Worst chapter of the series. Too many BJ's throughout the series. Take those out and you have MAYBE three chapters. Roughing up women is demeaning.

tinfoilhattinfoilhat6 months ago

This is a bad story in the mind control subject. Way too much violence. Mike is a scumbag and his buddy Jim is the same.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Well it was a half-decent series and there was so much more to tell. Wonder why the author stopped? And yeah there was way too much BJ/throatfucking but I guess the author just really likes that stuff. I wish there was more variety in the sex and a bit more plot. Anyway, I've read worse.

AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

Супер! Хочу продолжения

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