is it going to be a part two?
first story. I can't wait for more. Are you going to add to this story or write another one. Either way you are off to a really great start w/this story. I wish you lots of success as a now published author. Keep up the good work!
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is it going to be a part two?
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first story. I can't wait for more. Are you going to add to this story or write another one. Either way you are off to a really great start w/this story.
I wish you lots of success as a now published author. Keep up the good work!
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