All Comments on 'Roommates and Romance Ch. 01'

Not a bad concept - but terrible editor.

Not bad at all. would have liked it to be longer and have more of a plot, but hey this is good for most that will come in here to get off. If that is what you wish to do, go for it. I think though, you have the potential to write a much deeper story than this. I wish you the best of luck in your writing. Hope to see another post from you soon.

thank you.

Editing may not ever be perfect. but it's readable and enjoyable and I have to say had me rock hard ;)

Some people are just ridiculous and can't get passed their tiny pet peeves and realize that there is a difference between writing the queens English (grammar) and writing in prose.

Wonderful. keep up the good work.

Thanks for the feedback so far everyone. To those who want more, I do plan on continuing this story when I get a chance, so stay tuned. As to the editing, I know it's not perfect. I'll admit I rushed it to get it on here. I will be taking more time on my future entries to make sure that it is better.

I liked it, hope you'll write more soon :-)

To those that want more, you will be getting it soon. Working on a continuation and have many more ideas for stories after that.

I want it buried deep up my ass, all nine or more. Had 12 inches last night.

"You like this bitch?" I don't!!! I could do without the disrespect uttered by the 9" dickhead Jock! Maybe Wade can tie him up and return the favor at some point!

the big cock stuffed up my ass, sans lube.

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