Sphere Ch. 01

eep!

not so sure most of the female readers will bite into this story to much.. seems you've made us into disposable egg layers lol

Very grimm

Maybe this should be in the horror category??

Disturbing

The bit at the end there killed the story pretty good for me. I mean, it's a pretty silly scenario to begin with, but I guess you can get some sort of depth out of it if you explore the more negative aspects of the situation (of which there are plenty), or alternatively just settle for smut in a sci-fi setting. Going so far as to just discard the women afterwards makes for some really uncomfortable smut though.

Other than that, it was okay I guess, though it felt a bit rushed.

I liked it. But then I don't see much difference between the non human and erotic

horror genres. I know there have been tougher/darker stories than this in non human before, though.

I agree the ending blew it for me.

I loved it keep writing it please

Wow...

that is messed up. I loved it n dunno why...

that is some weird shit man

no kidding

no kidding man
wheres my chapter two