Black Owned Blonde Attorney Ch. 01

black owned blonde attorney

the first chapter was great, but i want 2 read more, thank you

Impossible to

rate this submission without at least one more chapter, probably more than one more chapter. Chapter one seems to have been done with some care, nicely organized and easy to read, but the ostensible reason for its having been written (the attorney's trip into Black servitude) is not touched upon or even hinted at. This reader will be looking and reading for the next submission.....Please make it longer than this one.

not done

nice start looking forward to chapter two

love the story...and read your bio. I too love black but it's pussy in my case. It all started in College. But if my wife found out she would leave me. I don't look at people from the outside just the inside...so keep up the good work love to read more

And the rest?

Strong set-up and context; the background is there, but we now await what you will paint on it. Continue as you begun and you will make my favorites.

Very good start

The writing is good. I hope we don't have to wait too long ch 2, and that's it's longer.

thanks for writing!

Good luck

Looks like you went ahead to get your explanation out in this first chapter, so it would seem you may be getting into the story of why you are black owned. If its your thing, then all i can say at least you are open about it unlike people who hide their desires.

Too short

Write longer chapters - this was a barely an introduction.

good start

sometimes i think i am black owned , buth then i come back hone and there is my husband and 2 sons
all white , and i found i just use black men for my pleasure

The Premise is sickly sad

Only a deranged person lacking in humanity would consider this erotic or entertaining.

A true story of this baseness is valueless except to those without any future in life's realities.

A sadly sick writer who needs help.

WTF

That was lame! Why did it end so abruptly?!

Y is this, considered interracial?

Sorry highly disappointed. great title but it's a lead on. I wanted to get something

Nice Start

Don't be discouraged by other's comments. You've got a story to tell and should tell it in all the detail you can. First person would be nice, as you could tell your inner feelings. Spell and grammar check to make the story flows properly and that the reader doesn't get hung up. You've got a nice start here, and I for one look forward to your future postings.

Stupid is just as stupid, whatever emphasis on the race, creed, color or nationality

????

Did i miss something? I was under the impression these where supposed to be sex stories. Where was the sex? I give this piece of crap a -5 star rating.