All Comments on 'Thanks to the Army'

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doomsday1391doomsday1391over 12 years ago
very nice

the only thing that would of made it better if a Marine got to use this little fuck toy.......

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
context?

Although the reader is able to figure out "which" war, it would have been nice to have some sort of single sentence at the beginning to provide a time frame. Other than that, nice little story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thanks - Do we get a part 2?

Hi,

I read your latest story. I enjoyed it and was hoping to see another 1 or 2 more parts to this story you have created.

Thanks again!

Ray

darkknight01darkknight01over 12 years ago
Erotica at it's best

This was a truly fantastic erotic story. The build up, the passion was just beautiful, sexy, and erotic. 5 stars

FYHBFYHBover 12 years ago
Ahhhh Yes

Perfect story with perfect ending

clippedwingsclippedwingsabout 12 years ago
=]

I love your stories. They're so short and eloquent that for a brief moment in time I feel as if I'm completely sucked into another world and left breathless by the richness of it's emotions. Many authors use filth and debauchery to excite their audience (and im fine with that, I even enjoy it most of the time ), but you seem to add an air of civility and intimacy that they lack, and that's what makes your stories better. <3

Pirate TregarePirate Tregarealmost 11 years ago
clippedwings nailed it

Can't say it better than that (way back over a year ago). Just found your stuff and I'm so enraptured in your style and ability to paint a picture that I've come to the end of the story and I haven't even touched my dick yet! lol

Spanky1372Spanky1372over 9 years ago
Wow

Another excellent story, lots of passion shining through.

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