by battleaxe_babe
the only thing that would of made it better if a Marine got to use this little fuck toy.......
Although the reader is able to figure out "which" war, it would have been nice to have some sort of single sentence at the beginning to provide a time frame. Other than that, nice little story.
Hi,
I read your latest story. I enjoyed it and was hoping to see another 1 or 2 more parts to this story you have created.
Thanks again!
Ray
This was a truly fantastic erotic story. The build up, the passion was just beautiful, sexy, and erotic. 5 stars
I love your stories. They're so short and eloquent that for a brief moment in time I feel as if I'm completely sucked into another world and left breathless by the richness of it's emotions. Many authors use filth and debauchery to excite their audience (and im fine with that, I even enjoy it most of the time ), but you seem to add an air of civility and intimacy that they lack, and that's what makes your stories better. <3
Can't say it better than that (way back over a year ago). Just found your stuff and I'm so enraptured in your style and ability to paint a picture that I've come to the end of the story and I haven't even touched my dick yet! lol