All Comments on 'Lisa & the Professor Ch. 1'

by caramelgirl_2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Crazy Professor!

What in blue thinking balls does he think he's doing?Balling the student chic like a whore isn't really a good idea.In the office at school?What if someone heard and checks on em?!it would be a scandal not only to the 2 lovers but to the entire school....Sheesh

FrozenSunFrozenSunover 10 years ago
More Please!!!

I really hope you come back and write some more !

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The plural

of thesis is theses.

Learn to spell.

black_maestrablack_maestraover 10 years ago
wow...

to the previous anon, after reading that hot story; the misspelled plural form of theses is what moved you to comment? once again, wow!

Caramel_girl2: great short story, loved how you were unique in describing his hungry dick as an animal and her animal like nose, very original. Out of the hundreds of romance and erotic stories I have read (paperback and eBooks), I can honestly say, it was refreshing to read a unique and well put together verses, great figurative use of words. Bravo! Keep writing.

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