Good Concept, Decent Execution, Insufficient Content !
More! I don't mean just the sex either . I don't mind a good tease but this is just a tease and run. Double up ( word volume ) and catch up!
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Anonymous10/02/11
very good start!
if this has so many parts, how about combining 2, 3 or 4 parts? It's always hard staying interested in a story that has only a short page each time. and this story sounds interesting.
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Good Concept, Decent Execution, Insufficient Content !
More! I don't mean just the sex either . I don't mind a good tease but this is just a tease and run. Double up ( word volume ) and catch up!
very good start!
if this has so many parts, how about combining 2, 3 or 4 parts? It's always hard staying interested in a story that has only a short page each time. and this story sounds interesting.
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