All Comments on 'The Beach Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I knew it

After I read part one and saw all the negative comments I knew what really happened and those other people were just dening it. Shannon is just your regular married white wife that can not help herself when it comes to the Superior Big Black Cock. That nigga gave her all she ever really wanted and now she is hooked bad. Another married white woman w/kds turned Big Black Cock slut. Her little dicked husband disappointed her again so she dresed like a slut in her tiny little pink bikini (I can just see her now) tits barely covered, ass showing and flirted and teased the first nigga w/a huge cock she saw, begging for the powerful superior BBC. Shes hooked and only Black Cock can satify her now .......write more more more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fucking Tramp!!!

Fuck me, another beautiful mom fucks a nigger. I hope in Ch. 3 the nice husband divorces the dirty slut, she can never be clean now that a dirty nigger fucked her. Nasty story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

YOU GOTTA DO THE NEXT ONE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another Whore!!

Damn, a nice family, and another married white woman who gives in to a big black dick. What the fuck is going on? Dirty fucking story but I want to find out what happened to the slut wife.

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 11 years ago
i loved it

once u get some black cock like that u have to have it over and over i know

TampaNaughtyNurseTampaNaughtyNurseover 11 years ago
Wow

I'm dripping wet. Can't wait to experience sex with a black man. If it's this hot, I'm hooked.

Willo7Willo7over 9 years ago

Great story looking forward to more

TigersmanTigersmanover 9 years ago
Pure fantasy

I read chapter 1 which definitely needed to be edited for spelling plus other problems. First their is no way to determine how thick or long a man's penis size by looking or measuring a woman's vagina as the vaginal canal would stretch to accommodate the man's penis then after withdrawal start to shrink back to normal. Second the likelihood of a man's penis breaking into the womb through the cervix is about as likely as a person surviving a vacuum without a space suit. Third the likelihood that a rapist would turn on the audio on a cellphone and not take pictures of his handiwork is slim to none. Fourth the comments by the police officer about the size/type of bikini the victim was wearing is something a male chauvinist pig would make not what a female police officer would make. This story is just pure fantasy that should have been in a different category plus had some serious editing done. I did not rate it as it was just beyond belief.

Design82Design82over 9 years ago

Good story!! The idea / concept is certainly original.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
love it

great story cant wait to read the rest

KeeganomicsKeeganomicsover 7 years ago
Great Read

Even seeing the twist coming I couldn't help but appreciate how well executed it was. Little things, like her trying to kiss him, were hilarious and made the while scene more entertaining.

pummel187pummel1873 months ago

Normal story about your average woman

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