The Hot List Ch. 04

A happy tale.

This was a romantic story of lasting love. There are some advantages to aging gracefully.

Nice

Good story well told. Your comment about what happens after retirement rings true. I wondered if it was my fault that my calls, emails and visits to the office were becoming fewer and far between, apparently not.

What the hell??!!!!?%#*

As I said before this story was wonderful. I loved every word of all four chapters until you ruined it by using the wrong damned car. Everyone knows a woman that special should not be in a crappy challenger. Other than that it was great SS06

Delightful Story

Really fine people with a fine life. Two years after retiring, 70% of the people do not you who you are!

Funny thing is that having emeritus status I am going in once a week and people that I do not know show up asking for suggestions...

great story

A really great story, well written.

Should be in Non-Erotic category

Especially given the name of the website - That's all

Wonderful L/W Story

That's right.....Loving Wives! Does everything in the L/W category require cheating or swinging or cuckolding or divorce or revenge or or or or............?

I think not!

True or not, thank you for sharing such a fun and romantic story.

HOT LIST SURE BEATS THE HELL

OUT OF BUCKET LIST OR DEATH WISH. TK U MLJ LV NV

nice to a wonderful story

5 stars....a real wife, nice to know they exist.

Wow

An absolute delight to read. What a great little tale! Well written, plausible and a lot of fun.

Thank you author.

A REAL Loving Wife story!

A very touching story about lifelong love. As hard as it is to believe from watching, reading, or listening to the media, there really are couples in love when they marry and 50 years after. Not everyone starts out the first day of their marraige wondering when it will all fall apart. I am truly sick and tired of folks criticizing love stories being in Loving Wife......Is there any doubt indeed that Pam was a loving wife? Not to me.....So quit your griping and just enjoy a good tale! Thanks for writing, Jim

What a story

No graphic sex, no cheating or swinging, no bbc, just a warm well written story about a real loving wife and the husband who loves her and is proud of it. Thanks for a great read and a story I can really relate to. Now back to my own loving wife, 54 years and counting

Not the Great Novel!!!!

Just a damn good piece of writing. Thanks for sharing.

Eleven of course

Great story with many a zig and zag, My only bitch and it really is inconsequential is, rewrite it as a four chapter story - not four separate chapters...easier to read.

Never the less - excellent.

Really nice...

Still, most of us can have this, even with some of the other stuff that is written about mixed in throughout the years. It is called committment to the marriage and love for each other no matter what is suffered by either... Just my opinion.


OldMarineVet Ron Wood

Thanks for a lot of great stories, and thanks for an ending where everyone did not have to die before you stopped writing!!;

Sailor 61
working on the wrong computer

Wait...what?

I get that she was a REAL loving wife, but there was no infidelity.

Plus the saccarine content got high enough that they brought in an insulin injection for me. (kidding)

This belonged in Romance.

You also need to work on POV, first, and third person stuff on this one.

Sigh....

Brought tears to my eyes....from a fan in the Philippines

thank you

Finally a story about a loving couple,in the loving wives genre. Thank You

Thanks for the effort.

What A Writer!

It warms my heart to read a story about true and real love. As I was reading, I kept waiting for something bad to happen. Was I relieved and glad when only good happened to a real loving couple. It was so refreshing!
Great job and Thank You

Happy to be wrong -

Great little story - and very well done -

Brilliant... again.

Really good narrative, really 'fulsom' characters with depth..... Good tale. Thanks for a great read, kind regards, Mike.

Astounding!

Truly a great piece of writing, this installment a clear 5 no if, ands or buts. Thx.

Agree with @patillie...

Brillant, to the point, and above all a LW story in it's best...5*

Very Sweet

What more can I say?

hot list

I am sure you have peers but I know of none better. This is a great story. I gave you a 5 on each of the stories but no comment until now. These stories should be listed as loving wives and the other as cheating wives.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Delightful

Congrats. Delightful. Four out of five. Boston to Birmingham is a masterpiece and now I am reading your older stuff. Great writing. Perhaps this should be in romance rather than LW, but otherwise I wouldn't change a thing. Somewhat autobiographical I suspect? Cheers Steve

hot list 04 2nd

you amaze me. on this time around I lowered the vote on the 1st chapter. I had forgotten I had read it before. I lost my way and thought that #3 was another story but picked it up again in #4 what can I say I'm 77. now with it all laid out the whole thing is definitely a 5* all around.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com

Jalapeño jelly

Pure, sweet love with a little bit of sexy heat. Loved it!

AAwww

Delightful to read, fun to think about, moving to comprehend. I liked it a lot.

Yes, it could have been done in one or two chapters, but the separation worked well.

Nice Change

Great to read a story about a guy adoring his wife.

luckiest people

They are the luckiest people i know-they had each other. Great story,loved it.