All Comments on 'Technical Difficulties Episode 05'

It's more and more becoming a case of an author submitting some emotional masturbation......As a writer, you have some small amount of talent...... SO WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU WASTING OUR FUCKING TIME SUBMITTING TRASH LIKE THIS? Surely you can do fucking better than this? Oh no, wait.... YOU CAN'T. YOU SUCK!

I cant believe all the negativity here! I think this story is pretty great, even if the chapters are infuriatingly short.

if your going to insult the aother please at least have the balls to use your name.? i am jonathan and this is crap.? there i said it.?