All Comments on 'Josh's Journal Ch. 09'

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Kazehana552Kazehana552over 12 years ago

Loved it!! But it was so short. I love the way the story is developing.

GweallGweallover 12 years ago
Fantastic

Cows stared at my exposed junk so I was quick about it.

Lol, I love your writing! Keep it up, I'm excited for more.

Dr_sneakersDr_sneakersover 12 years ago
So close to tears :_)

I was hyperventilating when I got to Josh's number, I had to turn away for a second, breath in and out a couple of times, then continue with the story I'm so happy for Josh and Ayden. This is it, Josh has to propose soon and I will guarantee a bucket full of tears.

julrijulriover 12 years ago
WOW!

This chapter had everything. A bit of drama, okay lots of drama. a hell of a lot of love. Humor,understanding,sex, fear. all of the emotions so raw and wonderful. Absolutely riveting. I think i held my breath a few times. Thank you so much for sharing this tale with all of us. Wow what a ride Kitten!! You go girl!!!!!

prostock69prostock69over 12 years ago

Loved this chapter! I love that Josh stood up and showed everyone that Ayden was his. I teared up during that scene. Please don't let anything bad happen to them. I don't know if I could take it!! :)

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 12 years ago
Wow

I read all chapters tonight as I couldn't stop. This is a brilliant, beautiful story. I love the way you have set up the chapters.

I have to go agree all I want is for this to have a happy ending as they both deserve it.

You are a gifted writer I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope there is a next chapter and thank you

StLouGuyStLouGuyover 12 years ago
I only have one word to say....

AWESOME!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I love this so much, I've been waiting for so long and it didn't dissapoint.x

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I love this story

It is so tender and sweet. Kudos to Josh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
love this story

cant wait for more it is a great story . love your writing ... good luck for the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
PLEASEEEEE

Want more Kitten, Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please please please start writing again!

I'm in love with this story and I know that you said you were going to stop writing for a little while but please hurry and start writing again because this story is amazing and I NEED MORE!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
PLEASE !!

Please keep writing, your amazing at it & this story gets better & better!!!! Don't stop now please keep writing!!

bookworm2192bookworm2192about 12 years ago
Excellent.

I am eagerly anticipating the next installment. =D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Here... Kitty, Kitty

Surely, this is not the end of this story..PLEEEASE FINISH Josh and Ayden's story.!

SpicyTurtle25SpicyTurtle25almost 12 years ago
Hahah

I laughed more than I should have with the whole field football thingy with all the numbers you know what I mean anyway, my fav comment was "we're dead" that just iced the cake! Haha

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
PLEASE READ

please do longer and shorter, take your time, perfection shouldn't be rushed

from zack

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Beautiful story!

This is just so amazingly beautiful. Please continue! <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

great story, but what happens now, you never to write if Josh ever got his butt or not

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

FIVE STARS.? BUT DONT LET IT GO TO YOUR HEAD

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