Interesting. If roles would be reversed there would be a group chanting "wimp, wimp, wimp"! Can we define a woman who wants her husband that badly as a slut? Perhaps a size queen... Very good idea!
Good story about deception, but she is really just deceiving herself if she thinks that having a family will change him. He won't change in the slightest; he will still be the same asshole.
The previous commentor reveals his/her lack of reading comprehension. If this author only wrote gay stories, this one wouldn't have been written. A check of the author's profile reveals that he writes in nearly every category here--and to very good effect.
The story itself is one of the few I've seen that actually writes to what the category should be. Great and fun story.
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Anonymous10/03/11
IT was good but in a strange way.
She didn't need to drug him, she needed to smack him upside the fucking head. If he can't be bothered to treat her like an equal partner in their relationship then she should take his child, his house, his cars and his money. Give him a wakeup call that would take his head outta his ass.
This is an erotica site, not a psychiatrist's office. He gave her the fuck she wanted. She went through the "keep him or leave him" routine and decided to keep him--and to fight for him. It doesn't matter if he's a dumb cluck. She obviously understands that--and enough foreshadowing was given that he is changing, I think. Duh. Loosen up. Just suspend your phobias and lay back and enjoy it--she plans to. *laughs*
This was a pretty good story, although it could have been edited better. There were some mechanical errors and you changed Susie's name from Winthrop to Wentworth. I have to wonder also: If Mary Lou really is a witch, couldn't she have just concocted some kind of love potion and slipped it into Doug's coffee?
I have to agree with Hamster too. Doug is an asshole, and will remain one whether he becomes a father or not. Once ML gets to be six or seven months pregnant, he will find some other woman, probably one who is not a member of her coven. Unless, of course, she is able to concoct the love potion I mentioned earlier.
English
Chapter 2?
Very, Very Good.
*****
Scary,
and good. Thank you.
A little hoodoo in the voodoo
What a twist. The connotations were indeed chilling. Enjoyed the story.
Very Enjoyable
Interesting. If roles would be reversed there would be a group chanting "wimp, wimp, wimp"! Can we define a woman who wants her husband that badly as a slut? Perhaps a size queen... Very good idea!
Interesting
Good story about deception, but she is really just deceiving herself if she thinks that having a family will change him. He won't change in the slightest; he will still be the same asshole.
AWFUL... l notice the author is gay and ONLY writes GAY stories
which explains WHY the husband is mind numbingly stupid and has to be drugged to have sex with his wife
and the author doesnt expalin WHY he is going to a strip Club wheh he ha a smoking hot wife at home
Great Story for Category
The previous commentor reveals his/her lack of reading comprehension. If this author only wrote gay stories, this one wouldn't have been written. A check of the author's profile reveals that he writes in nearly every category here--and to very good effect.
The story itself is one of the few I've seen that actually writes to what the category should be. Great and fun story.
IT was good but in a strange way.
She didn't need to drug him, she needed to smack him upside the fucking head. If he can't be bothered to treat her like an equal partner in their relationship then she should take his child, his house, his cars and his money. Give him a wakeup call that would take his head outta his ass.
Not a Shrink's Couch
This is an erotica site, not a psychiatrist's office. He gave her the fuck she wanted. She went through the "keep him or leave him" routine and decided to keep him--and to fight for him. It doesn't matter if he's a dumb cluck. She obviously understands that--and enough foreshadowing was given that he is changing, I think. Duh. Loosen up. Just suspend your phobias and lay back and enjoy it--she plans to. *laughs*
Pretty Good
This was a pretty good story, although it could have been edited better. There were some mechanical errors and you changed Susie's name from Winthrop to Wentworth. I have to wonder also: If Mary Lou really is a witch, couldn't she have just concocted some kind of love potion and slipped it into Doug's coffee?
I have to agree with Hamster too. Doug is an asshole, and will remain one whether he becomes a father or not. Once ML gets to be six or seven months pregnant, he will find some other woman, probably one who is not a member of her coven. Unless, of course, she is able to concoct the love potion I mentioned earlier.
Perhaps too subtle
No, Box, Mary Lou isn't really a witch. Thanks for pointing out the name problem, though.
Ewww!
She´s a wimp and he´s a slut.
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