All Comments on 'The Coming Storm'

I thought it was sexy and passionate. Really good first story.

Very nice, very sexy, and not just for a first story. Keep it up!

and you said it wasnt a deep story!

You put the literature in Literotica. Wonderful first effort. Congratulations on a beautifully well-developed and passionate story.

Delightfully steamy and extremely well written! I look forward to reading more from you.

One of the best first stories i've read on this site. You have real talent

It is always good to change from bottom to top and top to bottom. I liked your story and look for more.

Absolutely sexy, and even if it didn't come with a plot it had some background. Best in a while, would love to see you write more.

I love storms. They do seem to bring out something "other" at times.

The elemental nature of the storm echos in the lovers. Mmmm. Thanks.

This was a wonderful, beautifully written story. Thank you for the passion it elicited within me.

I am impressed. A fantastic story, Role reversal without recriminations, got to be excited about the creativity behind the story. Very good writing and very good first impression. Hope you have more gems to bring to the front.