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Amazing!
I really love your writing. You have a wonderful imagination and you have an incredible way with words.
You weave wonderful stories and take the reader on a journey they can't get off of until the end.
Keep writing and I will keep reading.
What crap!
“That is exactly the position I wanted you in...save your strength, you're going to need it for later. I am going to take your ass, rip into you and you will feel like you are dying, for a few minutes, and then, you will beg me for more.”
Then he puts her in her car and buckles the seat belt.
Absolute Trash!
Wont be reading this author anymore!
I actually enjoyed this.
I have read your writing before and I have always enjoyed it. This one was walked a fine line, but when all was said and done I liked it.
Also, your reader is amazing! I could get lost in his voice!
My Reader
Thanks for your comment. I just realized that I had forgotten to give credit to him in the text of the story.
Thanks to Photoman4u2 for putting audio to this story.
And yes, I agree, one can get lost in his voice.
Enjoyed the story and the reader's voice especially. Very sexy... 5
My Pleasure!
BethyBoo, as always it was my distinct pleasure to try to bring life to another one of your stories.
I only hope that I do your words justice. Thank you for asking me to lend my voice.
I hope to do more in the future.
Photoman4u2.
SecretSub
OMG this was so so horny. I am incredibly turned on now. Love your work!!
Bethyboo should have read it herself.
It is distracting to have a male voice.
This is sick. Should be a rape warning. Rape is NEVER okay and should NEVER be the basis of an erotic story, especially with no warning.
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