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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/11

Amazing!

I really love your writing. You have a wonderful imagination and you have an incredible way with words.

You weave wonderful stories and take the reader on a journey they can't get off of until the end.

Keep writing and I will keep reading.

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by Anonymous10/06/11

What crap!

“That is exactly the position I wanted you in...save your strength, you're going to need it for later. I am going to take your ass, rip into you and you will feel like you are dying, for a few minutes, and then, you will beg me for more.”

Then he puts her in her car and buckles the seat belt.

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by Anonymous10/13/11

Absolute Trash!

Wont be reading this author anymore!

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by Anonymous10/21/11

I actually enjoyed this.

I have read your writing before and I have always enjoyed it. This one was walked a fine line, but when all was said and done I liked it.

Also, your reader is amazing! I could get lost in his voice!

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by Bethyboo10/21/11

My Reader

Thanks for your comment. I just realized that I had forgotten to give credit to him in the text of the story.

Thanks to Photoman4u2 for putting audio to this story.

And yes, I agree, one can get lost in his voice.

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by ohsweetviolet10/21/11

Enjoyed the story and the reader's voice especially. Very sexy... 5

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by photoman4u210/24/11

My Pleasure!

BethyBoo, as always it was my distinct pleasure to try to bring life to another one of your stories.

I only hope that I do your words justice. Thank you for asking me to lend my voice.

I hope to do more in the future.

Photoman4u2.

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by Anonymous11/10/11

SecretSub

OMG this was so so horny. I am incredibly turned on now. Love your work!!

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by Anonymous01/21/14

Bethyboo should have read it herself.

It is distracting to have a male voice.

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by Anonymous12/06/15

This is sick. Should be a rape warning. Rape is NEVER okay and should NEVER be the basis of an erotic story, especially with no warning.

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