... I haven't read any of your stories before today, but I found this one to be quite outstanding - I shall have to broaden my horizons, it would seem!
what an interesting turn, that somehow the "bottom" gets to give the commands. . . and i so loved the take-down at the end. truly, the greatest sources of the sexiest shivers- to be taken so dutifully and so powerfully, finding that the only thing that can be said is, "yes, Master." your writing style is a lovely one- am glad your talents have been shared with the rest of U/us.
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You have a lovely style ...
... I haven't read any of your stories before today, but I found this one to be quite outstanding - I shall have to broaden my horizons, it would seem!
5 *s and thank you for a very fine piece of work.
Welcome back.
A most complex tale, beautifully told.
I loved how she goaded him.
Your descriptions of her 1940s costume, her thick waves of hair and bold attitude were vivid. What a lusty glimpse of their relationship.
That's nice work!
A bit short, but this has to be one of the most entertaining, although unusual, stories in this category.
Good work!
a tantalizing shiver...
what an interesting turn, that somehow the "bottom" gets to give the commands. . . and i so loved the take-down at the end. truly, the greatest sources of the sexiest shivers- to be taken so dutifully and so powerfully, finding that the only thing that can be said is, "yes, Master." your writing style is a lovely one- am glad your talents have been shared with the rest of U/us.
Wonderful
But you already knew that I thought that. Thanks again
Nicely Done!
I like, I like! You do it so well, wouldn't mind seeing more of this genre from you!
And it still makes me smile
It also makes me sad that there aren't any new stories. I hope you are still writing - it is what you are meant to do
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