All Comments on 'Halloween and Batman'

by DG Hear

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent

Light, good (as usual) and fun to read.

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
DG, you are the man!

This was indeed an excellent story! I don't mean to embarrass you with excessive praise, but, as I have said before, I've never known you to miss. Thanks for all of your stories.

bruce22bruce22over 12 years ago
A true snack

Light and tasty. Sort of sugary though... But I like all of DG's work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sort of Rambling

Went on a bit long with no big surprises and it could have used more editing (more commas for complex sentences, some misspellings, and "Dad" isn't capitlized as much as it was here--"my dad" wouldn't be capitalized). Sort of run of the mill for a contest entry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Way to go!

That was such a nice story--loved it!

ipmwebipmwebover 12 years ago
Not your usual

Not in your usual style but I liked the change. Nice story and pleasant reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

You are a great writer loved this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story, but felt it was too short. Write more about them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
If you write it.....

I know I will like it. Some of you stories just aren't long enough like this one. It needs more parts,please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story

As always!

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 10 years ago
A good man earns hs future -

I like it - simple and possible and happy -

krosis666krosis666over 9 years ago
Refreshing story

Especially on this site. I really liked it. Nice guy meets beautiful and genuinely honest and loving woman. And shockingly, (for this site) end up happy together.

Thanks for writing this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
SHORT AND SWEET

FAN BLOODY TASTIC STORY MAN! Worth the price of admission!

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

OH OH OH! WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A DOG AND A MARINE BIOLOGIST?

ONE WAGS A TAIL AND THE OTHER TAGS A WHALE

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Makings

It had the makings of a decent story.Pity there wasn't more

Grimjack01Grimjack01about 4 years ago
Nice story but too short

This had all the makings of an interesting story but it was cut way too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needed to be extended with an epilog or a sequel. Oh well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Could use a longer ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

5*

Cute and sweet but cut way too short. It badly need a sequel.

BJ

Simon_MastersSimon_Mastersalmost 2 years ago

Why would he need help in court?

NitpicNitpicabout 1 year ago
Reasonable

Reasonable story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story. It would have been even better to see how things developed between the two of them.

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