by DG Hear
This was indeed an excellent story! I don't mean to embarrass you with excessive praise, but, as I have said before, I've never known you to miss. Thanks for all of your stories.
Light and tasty. Sort of sugary though... But I like all of DG's work!
Went on a bit long with no big surprises and it could have used more editing (more commas for complex sentences, some misspellings, and "Dad" isn't capitlized as much as it was here--"my dad" wouldn't be capitalized). Sort of run of the mill for a contest entry.
Not in your usual style but I liked the change. Nice story and pleasant reading.
I know I will like it. Some of you stories just aren't long enough like this one. It needs more parts,please.
I like it - simple and possible and happy -
Especially on this site. I really liked it. Nice guy meets beautiful and genuinely honest and loving woman. And shockingly, (for this site) end up happy together.
Thanks for writing this one.
FAN BLOODY TASTIC STORY MAN! Worth the price of admission!
Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!
Love you all! GREG.
OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
OH OH OH! WHAT IS THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN A DOG AND A MARINE BIOLOGIST?
ONE WAGS A TAIL AND THE OTHER TAGS A WHALE
This had all the makings of an interesting story but it was cut way too short.
Good story. It would have been even better to see how things developed between the two of them.