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Keep up the good work!
Excellent! Nice story with a different plot twist. Very well written, with good syntax, grammar, punctuation and editing. Good job well done!
W.B.C.
wannabe cucks will read, spank, then leave a negative comment in self-loathing - thanks for giving them jerk material, they love the idea of getting cucked - they just hate themselves for it so they assuage their latent guilt by posting a negative comment
fuck them
except for wbc, fuck them, all the literary experts read and comment, but do not contribute. i liked the way this was going, it is short . . . . but i look forward to the rest. thanks for having the balls to write a story and submit it to the loathing lurkers that wish they had a life!!
lol.......funny
it's funny how all these anon's talking about having balls but don't have an account to speak of ....lol and they call others WBC, nothing I like, but writting style is good and husband was involved.....3 stars
Well written
Kind of short, but we all have other things to do. Not a theme I particularly enjoy or identify with, but you build tension well and know k\how to build a scene.
Keep Going!
Longer would be nice. Don't let nay sayers get you down. Has a lot of promise.
I'm a woman....
And I liked it! :P
Re- I am a woman.
Are you,really? Show me!
Delicious!
Highly Recommend!
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