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(DBZ) What Once was Lost

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by kaidman10/08/11

I liked it

good story slight errors but still one of my favs

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by Anonymous10/11/11

nice!!!

like the story, needed some editing... but keep a it, when u get tired of celebrity stuff it'd be great to see you write something other than celebrity... or a goku story bahahaha good work

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by Anonymous03/30/14

Great story

Like I said great story the one thing I didn't like however was how all the girls that went with Videl just kind of diapered after v\Videl finding Gohan. I would have liked to see them at least search for Videl a little bit. Then there reaction when they see Gohan and Videl back together not to mention just having had sex.

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