A great read of magic and reality. Well done story!
I just need to say thank you for the entertainment! You have not lost your twisted and wonderfully original mind set.
It pretty much ended like I thought it would. Not much sex but the great story more than makes up for it, very well told. Keep writing.
this is fullblown. i think we all want a chance to right things up in our lives that we did to ourselves. since we know that there is no such thing as a time travel, this will work.
Hadn't checked your sight lately so missed these gems. Making old story plots for cheating come out differently...Great!
Ronald R Wood
Entertaining read, humorous and smart, thanks for submitting.
This could easily be made into an awesome movie!
Couldn't even get halfway through the first page. The protagonist was such an absolute, complete asshole.
Well done. Great story, well thought out and everything flowed. Excellent
I read this story some time ago and then forgot the name and author's name, just came on to it by chance and I'm glad I did, it's a great story.
Wonderful plotting - superb telling. Totally engrossing.
HDK, I truly wish you would write more. This was and still is a fine story with just the right touch.
great concept and execution. I just read a comment disregarding the story. you need to be treated for ADHD so you could finish reading it instead of stopping in the middle and see how good it is.
are still the best.
THIS JUNK exist
But I'm still not sure what happened. You have the number of the hypno doctor?
Honestly the best story I've ever read.
its always good to have A...B....C or even more if needed, TK U MLJ LV NV
The moral of the story is....treat your family as if someone is always watching? Sounds good to me. Of course, as fast as we are losing our civil rights it won't be long before the government has camera's in all our homes, anyway. They'll just say it's for our own protection and safety. Plus we'll get a break on our health and home insurance. I've read all your stories and loved them all. Then I wait a few years and read them again and still get a chuckle out of them. A true testament of an excellent author and all his works. Thank you
my favorite of yours. Very original. Well written. Happy ending. What more could you ask for? Five stars.
Really creative hook and plot.
Needs a sequel highlighting Mr. Fargo. :o)
...my two favorite stories this author has written. Thanks for the great reads!
Very good story and a refreshing reading...4*...Thank you
Congrats. Well done. Four out of five. A marvelous work of imagination. I a really haven't read anything like this on this site before. I took a long time before I realized not everything was as it seems. That means either I am an idiot or you are a good writer. I chose to believe the second. Cheers. Steve
Just brilliant and original. 5*
You are a very versatile writer. I enjoy your stories. Thanks.
Very creative. Very original. Still five stars.
Great story.....excellent execution.......*****
Didn't see this ending coming.
Lovely story and I thought there had to be twist coming somewhere.
Everything made sense right at the end, just as it should.
Well done ...... a really good read.
WOW! Amazing and satisfying story!!
At first I was not into it but started figuring it out about a third through.
Enjoyed it thoroughly. Only improvement would be if he was able to handle Steve a little better later but still very satisfying and loved how he stood up to Steve even if he couldn't beat him in a fight!
Truly good story!!!
I had part of it figured out about halfway through, but the shrink was a surprise of course. I laughed at many parts, the insults and sarcasm were clever, even hilarious. It didn't bother me too much that he got knocked down by butthead Fargo; his job, as the husband, was to fight for his wife. He did. Maybe not very well, but he did fight for her.
It didn't surprise me to see that winning the fight was NOT what she valued most - she loved the fact that he fought for her. Also remember that the fight achieved what he wanted; Fargo stormed off unsatisfied and without his wife. I think Fargo also realized that, if he still wanted Bonnie, he would have to fight Chuck again.
There's nothing wrong with getting knocked down - what's important is that when she needed him - he stood up.
Loved the story, very refreshing to see a different kind of story that ends happily. Thanks!
Wow, you got me. Totally didn't see the ending coming like it did. Totally loved the entire story concept idea and how you told it. Thanks for sharing it. BK
I love your imagination!
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