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Hostel Ghosts

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by Anonymous

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by estragon10/05/11

A Good Story

well-told.

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by Goldfish1410/05/11

nice narrative

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by Anonymous10/20/11

Could be better

The story is nice, but the writing was at times clumsy and less than vivid, almost tame in the descriptions of things.

You didn't particularly make me feel horror or fear or even interest in the ghostly encounter.

Take some risks and move from the comfortable.

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