All Comments on 'Halloween Heat'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Tough read!

Change of tense makes this story a tough read. First person, third person, which is it??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What ever person,

I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ho Hum

There was no change in tense--it's consistently in the first person (all perceived through the eyes of I). I thought it was thin for a contest entry, though. Nothing special as a story--not much story at all, actually. There are some off images. For instance, the sparkle of the eye isn't flesh. Ho hum, much the same as most other essentially sex scenes found on this site.

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 12 years ago
Extremely Poor Content and Writing

If this is the best you have to offer for a contest or a nornal story imput for "Literotica" please "Do not write any further stories." This one was a total waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Loved it!

I so totally loved this story! Could just imagine that being me looking for my next prey. Kitty.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good imagery

I thought the imagery in this story was good. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
passable

Way to much intro and varied between story telling and commentary, stick to one theme, nice try but not competition material.

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