My Sister Eva Started It All

WOW!!!

My favorite story!

WOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!

DAMN! and I thought watching porn was more pleasurable! Hot f**king damn!

Good God....

That was fucking amazing! You HAVE to do "The continuing story of Dale, Eva, Robin and Amber"

paper or hard back

This story was incredible amazing and a wonderful Read in book form I'd read it over and over again. kudos to the author all around great story full of passion a lil drama and lots of sex PERFECT
just wondering could this be a true story
confessions of life???
Who knows 😆😆😆
Great anyways thanks enjoyed

Damm ..it was the BEST i've read

Wow really amazing ....so damm hot ..would love to read next part.
anyone saying this story sucks. ..well fuck him/her

Excellent story!!!

Dale has got it going on! I loved everyone's vocalization, it's just what I would like to hear when I'm fucking some babes! I don't know what I'd do if I had three hot pussy's to fuck!!!

That shit was amazing!

Loved it that story gave me life! I masturbated, while reading the story! This was so good Dale was everything!

Simply wonderful.....

Thank you for sharing. I loved the way you write. Reality/fantasy, who fealty gives a damn. It is a story to be read or not. By being in the comments means they've read it to the end So Ignore the anons. Write another chapter, marry Amber, keep fucking both Eva and Robin (mom) and knock them all up.
It's easily worth the 5 stars and thank you again for sharing.

Fantasy land

What a load of horseshit! 9 ropes of cum? 10-12 hours straight? Probably a high school student. 1star!

Holy crap!

That was incredible. Hard to believe that guy could do it so much & so long. But its a story, right??
Good job, keep it "up"!

piece of shit

Those of you talking shit about this story can't say shit about it. Not one of you bitches could write something that even comes close to being as good as this is. So stfu!!!

More

You need to write more of this story as a contribution to mankind no wait human kind for we are better for having a story like this u sir are a genius to be celebrated throughout time and space.

Amazing!

Best story on this site,I keep coming back to it. Great story!

ok

I've seen and wrote better. From one too ten, this was about a three.

I enjoyed it

Yes it had editing errors etc.,etc......... Anon you are so full of yourself. " I have wrote better" well if you have, then I guess you have a very good editor as your use of the English language sucks. I have said it here before if you want to criticize without offering help and support then go to Amazon or iTunes and pay for your stories.
Keep up your efforts dezurtdawg that's how we improve.

Loved it

Great story, would like to hear more about how they get on later with it :)

Please give us more

One of the best way I have read on here please I beg you to write more

Amusing sci-fy

Amusing read, but it should really be in the category 'fantasy and sci-fy for oversexed juveniles'.

Arrogance is a turnoff

you need to be more realistic and descriptive. people need to be able to relate and insert themselves into the story. the scenario is great but there is no detail and no context. its not a fantasy. and the thing with the 10 inch cock is overboard. i can tell that in the story youre trying to convince us of it. use imagery and adjectives to cover this part.

amazing

Amazing story6812

good story ruined by the mothers interaction

A good storyline in essence, horny teenagers at college, the plot was believable and the story unravelling was logical and enjoyable but it went totally off the rails when you introduced the mother. The language changed to unlikely vocabulary and style for such an interaction. The mother is clearly a closet dirty slut too, despite her conservative values. her reaction was beyond rational belief unless she had been harboring incestuous thoughts for many years. I wish more stories were written where the guy is normally sized and not hung like a horse, its every guys fantasy to be huge, but we're not all made that way.

More plese...!

Sequel...Series?!?

a bit different inserts

should have spanked Amber , belt whipped the sister, and riding cropped mom's behind for well just because, as a bit more, need to have Amber come back and ask for the spanking like mom received some good cropping,! and maybe a belt job for mom..
sister belted by amber and cropped by mom ~

My Cock will NEVER be the same!!!!!!

I wouldn't have believed a 77 year old man (ME) could respond sexually to an internet fuck tale but THIS ONE did the trick!!!!!!! I couldn't believe how much harder my cock got reading this - and how much more volume of cum than I'm used to came shooting out of it - not once - not twice - but THREE FUCKING TIMES!!!!!!!!! You really have a way with words and understand how the fuck mechanism works way better than most.

I just wish that the story could be true with me in the starring role!

INCEST AT ITS BEST

A delight to read and enjoy from the art of incest story telling in a five star way.

Continuation, Please.

It is so wonderful, that all three girls love him/his cock, Please plan a Sequel.
The Sweet thing is that there is NO Jealousy, all LOVE.

Needs more

Daaaaamn!!!

If only. Damn good story. I give it 5 stars but in reality it gets a 4 on the Budweiser Scale !!!(***)

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amazing

Wow, thank you and you need to write a follow up. Maybe all three girls taking him on spring break or off for his college graduation and party on an island and showing him a good time. along with he and Amber getting married. what a great story... thanks

re: taco1085 and others that want more.....

He did do another story. Read My Sister Eva Continues It All

fantastic

enjoyed every page

lol i have wasted a 100tissues till now and only reached the 2nd page

Lol

Family And A Friend Lust Fulfilled

Terrific writings - and your description of Eva getting off was likely the most realistic build and climax I have ever read. Truly a great five star story and the inclusion of mom in the mix proved to be a delicious addition in how to describe sex within a family setting. Likely one of the best I've ever read on this site - if not the best.

Fun story, although

there could be a little bit of tension somewhere. My Mom was horrified I was fucking my sister, then she saw my dick, then she fucked me: transition time -- 60 seconds.

holloweeen

Amber, eve and mom just fantastic, just

Fantastic

Kept me glued to the story from start to finish. Fucking mum was so hot,

wow...

"Even though I have now, as an 18 year old senior in high school, filled out into a 6'2" 210 pound hunk of solid muscles she still calls me that. Trouble is, I no longer have the pencil dick that I had as a baby boy, instead I now sport a solid eight inches that is as big around as my wrist!"
Lying faggot

Good for jerking off, not much else.

The author makes a few grammar mistakes here and there, and the characters are a little bit ridiculous. A few run-on sentences don't kill anyone, but this story is like a junky 70's movie. It's not particularly good, but boy does it feel good to read.

Great story

Great story.

Couldn't do it...

This reads like a parody of everything an insecure teenager thinks is the definition of manliness and an amazing lover. I really tried to finish the story, and failed.

Stunning story

Wow!
Stunning story, very hot and sexy. Maybe in the limits of the credible sexual resistance of Dale, but I know that`s is a fiction tale.
A sequel are welcome. I don`t know if you have written yet.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

Outstanding

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ You definitely have to do a sequel..

really ?

good god this is a standard high school level story at best. I get it some dude like reading about huge dick imagine little girl tight pussies and such. I got bore real quick when he mention I have eight inch dick I tune out because he comes the standard cliques ohh so big! bigger than your father just another copy paste story 1/5 rating

Sequel Please

Great Story.

Pencil Dick?

Must be nice to have 3 beautiful women want you even though he deceived.Amber and Eva
Ron/cowboyridecc@yahoo

Okay

I've read part's of this befor in other stories and this is pretty good though. It could've been been more creative. It just seems like you piccesed it together.

Great the 2nd time.

Good to read this one on date night. Really sets the mood for me.

Dear god.

This was so amazing. Great story.

AND....!???

Great story begs a follow up. Mum & Amber, Mum & Evie, Dale with all of them.
How about the three move in together with Mum as a regular visitor? Etc.

Wow

Second time around for me too and this is still a very hot read. Loved it.