All Comments on 'The Collar of Anubis'

Please continue!

want more... longer... more detailed of course... but want more none-the-less...

You left it too early!!! Now you have to write nore, now would be good. I'm not a patient kitty. =^_^=PK

It has the essence of a good story, but the sex scenes overshadow the interesting portions, the plot, the story line.

good story. I read and enjoyed your first story also. You are proving to be good author and I look forward to reading your next story.

I thought it was a very interesting start. You've left yourself with several directions for the plot (and a bit of history you could write in as well). Look forward to reading more.

I'm a sucker for Ancient Egypt, and I'm glad I stumbled across this one. I think it can stand alone, although I can certainly see how you can continue the story if you choose. Plenty of heat, and a nice mythos that could be creatively worked into the real mythology and history. Well done!

I love stories about ancient Egypt and it's gods. This is a great little story!

Good story! Epic God level fucking, and the guy was bashful! Perfect

I can see him jumping in and out of her life

My thinking was this was another fucked by a animal god/minotaur. Instead it has the feel of some epic story's first chapter.

^Pervus

Extra points for creativity. Well written. and extremely hot

Who could ask for anything more? Certainly not I. I would give this story six stars if it were possible. I hope that in some sequel she can re-enter this dig and bring out photos and tracings enough to make her reputation (and perhaps have a reunion).