by Machiavellia
want more... longer... more detailed of course... but want more none-the-less...
You left it too early!!! Now you have to write nore, now would be good. I'm not a patient kitty. =^_^=PK
It has the essence of a good story, but the sex scenes overshadow the interesting portions, the plot, the story line.
good story. I read and enjoyed your first story also. You are proving to be good author and I look forward to reading your next story.
I thought it was a very interesting start. You've left yourself with several directions for the plot (and a bit of history you could write in as well). Look forward to reading more.
I'm a sucker for Ancient Egypt, and I'm glad I stumbled across this one. I think it can stand alone, although I can certainly see how you can continue the story if you choose. Plenty of heat, and a nice mythos that could be creatively worked into the real mythology and history. Well done!
I love stories about ancient Egypt and it's gods. This is a great little story!
Good story! Epic God level fucking, and the guy was bashful! Perfect
My thinking was this was another fucked by a animal god/minotaur. Instead it has the feel of some epic story's first chapter.
^Pervus
Extra points for creativity. Well written. and extremely hot
Who could ask for anything more? Certainly not I. I would give this story six stars if it were possible. I hope that in some sequel she can re-enter this dig and bring out photos and tracings enough to make her reputation (and perhaps have a reunion).