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wow
Please continue!
eh...
want more... longer... more detailed of course... but want more none-the-less...
OHHHH COME ON!!
You left it too early!!! Now you have to write nore, now would be good. I'm not a patient kitty. =^_^=PK
Interesting
It has the essence of a good story, but the sex scenes overshadow the interesting portions, the plot, the story line.
Another
good story. I read and enjoyed your first story also. You are proving to be good author and I look forward to reading your next story.
A very interesting pre-lude
I thought it was a very interesting start. You've left yourself with several directions for the plot (and a bit of history you could write in as well). Look forward to reading more.
Glad I stumbled across this
I'm a sucker for Ancient Egypt, and I'm glad I stumbled across this one. I think it can stand alone, although I can certainly see how you can continue the story if you choose. Plenty of heat, and a nice mythos that could be creatively worked into the real mythology and history. Well done!
Very good!
I love stories about ancient Egypt and it's gods. This is a great little story!
Chainfire
Good story! Epic God level fucking, and the guy was bashful! Perfect
sex slave
I can see him jumping in and out of her life
I thought this would suck, instead best one pager I have read in a long time.
My thinking was this was another fucked by a animal god/minotaur. Instead it has the feel of some epic story's first chapter.
^Pervus
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