All Comments on 'Demoness'

More visits and kinky sex please?

I was hoping for more visit as well.

for the futa/shemale warning since I'm not into that kind of thing. Unfortunately not everyone is so kind.

If there were more stories like this I might actually be willing to support writers with money. HA.

When I hit such obvious errors as writing waste instead of waist, it jars me enough to stop reading. Please close-read your story before publishing.

Please do not comment on spelling errors if you do not know the meaning of the word. Telling the author to use "waste" instead of "waist" is wrong the author did use the correct word. Please use a dictionary before posting so you know what you are talking about is correct or not.

Please i want more please great story can't wait for the next chpt

would love to hear about your next encounter with Gira is there a part two?

Your mind excites me with immense curiosity of what we could be together I love your stories and would love to read more I'm getting wet and horny as hell thank you!!

I have readed this story of yours a few times now I love it you did a great job on it. Its one of my favorite stories on here I hope that you make a part two soon,

Keep writing

LeeIII

6th paragraph: Joan became Jane.

A body has a waist but produces waste.

Interesting piece. I like it!