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Demoness

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/16/11

More visits and kinky sex please?

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by Anonymous10/17/11

I was hoping for more visit as well.

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by green_dreams06/14/12

Thanks ...

for the futa/shemale warning since I'm not into that kind of thing. Unfortunately not everyone is so kind.

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by Anonymous03/06/13

This Pleases Me Greatly

If there were more stories like this I might actually be willing to support writers with money. HA.

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by Anonymous06/27/13

Needs a good editor.

When I hit such obvious errors as writing waste instead of waist, it jars me enough to stop reading. Please close-read your story before publishing.

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by Anonymous07/21/13

Spelling

Please do not comment on spelling errors if you do not know the meaning of the word. Telling the author to use "waste" instead of "waist" is wrong the author did use the correct word. Please use a dictionary before posting so you know what you are talking about is correct or not.

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by animaluver4009/11/13

please moorrer

Please i want more please great story can't wait for the next chpt

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by Anonymous01/15/15

looking forward to hearing more

would love to hear about your next encounter with Gira is there a part two?

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