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Certainly worthy of a read (as a story) and worth a REread to appreciate how well it was written.Only wish the author had more ideas (in maybe less esoteric categories) needing to be put to page. Bravo.
we think alike....
first. this is fantanstic story.
I used to steal my mothers silk panties to do the same, I always wanted to try them on after she worn them, the smell was a knockout. still remember today.
Thanks
M
I feel the same
Oh my, this story is so hot. I feel the same. I know my son has borrowed my panties. I only hope he masturbates with them. I masturbated reading this and wanting to be her. I came four times reading this. I want my son to fuck me. I want him to fuck me so hard.
extremely hot
i 'm with the crowd, I loved it! I hope to see more of your stories..
I wish I was your son!
"... made no move to do anything other than take pleasure in the feeling that I had fucked my son and his cum was running out of me for the first time. I promised myself that it would not be the last time."
It's a giant turn-on to know that there are many smart, beautiful moms out there that have such feelings and thoughts for their sons ... and have the writing talent and courage to let it be known, wow!
I jerked off!
That was great. I jerked off long and hard while reading it.
Outstanding!
It is such a pleasure to read a story written by someone who was paying attention in school when spelling, usage, and grammer were covered. A well-written tale of such a hot and sexy "taboo-laden" subject couldn't help but cause my own rock-hard erection. I started out trying to coast along with just light stroking, determined to make it almost to the end before cutting loose; I didn't even get close!
Thank you so much.....please hurry along with the continuance!
Yes!! I just found Chapter 2....
way to go!! Gotta run, got some heavy reading to do... ;-)
Completely agree with
Anonymous 08/13/12 "Outstanding!"
GREAT story!
Excellent. You should write more!!
More please
Great story, please let us know what happens next.
Patiently waiting !!!
GREAT STORY
WELL WRITTEN, VERY GOOD BUILD UP RIGHT UNTIL THE ENDING. NO DOUBT THERE WILL BE AT LEAST TWO SEQUELS
Estupendo!!!!
Thank you for sharing your writing talent and succulent libido...looking forward to more.
Awesome!
Loved every bit of it!
I wish my mom was like you!
So hot
This turned me like crazy...awesome storytelling five stars
Ummmmm....
It's been close to a year since these stories were posted, time for more or let it be known where we can read addition works by you. One of the most well written and erotic tales on this site.
HOT Story....
Your story is sooo hot. One can't help but cum while reading it.
True story?
I am a sucker for the "based on real events" line. I would like to think that at least half of it was true. The emotions and flirting felt very real; a fantastic read. Thank you for sharing your fantasies with us.
Great story......
but I always wonder how many of these hot mother/son stories supposedly written by moms are not in fact dudes trying to fulfill their psychological/sexual needs by hoping "moms" will email them and relate their own supposed sexual experiences with their sons (so they can all jack-off while believing that they're indeed having exchanges that are authentic but which are in fact only horny dudes thinking that they're so tricky that they've overcome the problem of not being able to figure out who's a woman and who's a dude in this environment of anonymity).
peeking through my fingers
I sort of read this between splayed fingers, feeling weird and wetly turned-on at the same time with the powerful imagery. The build-up was good and nicely done. I kept thinking she was going to give a blow-job (and I still want to see that!!!) but the author moved right for the big score.
I don't fancy my handsome son, but I remembered finding hundreds of used tissues in his room's wastebasket. The story brought back unresolved dreams about my Daddy that only grew stronger through my teens and into my twenties. There were times when he could have had me on my knees with the bat of an eyelash. He sometimes tells me I'm not too old to be spanked, and I keep asking when.
I disagree with Otis and it's a shame his comment was the first up. He must be totally tone deaf to female writing.
The mommy thing I have mixed feelings about. I remember how creepy it was to hear Ronald Reagan call his wife 'Mommy'.
I appreciated the subtlety of the lesbian experiment. It wasn't overdone which made it more believable.
I look forward to further posts.
awsome!
Wow! That was awsome Linda. Great story. I love to hear about true family loving. I can't wait to read your other story.
Keep up the great work!
Wow!
Congratulations. Now that was some story.
I really enjoyed the slow build up and gentle push to reach the climax (no pun intended).
Once again it is so good to read another story from someone who actually understands that love is what any good incest story is all about.
I look forward to reading the 2nd chapter. Even if it wasn't already there waiting for me to read I wouldn't try to suggest where it should go or how it should get there. I don't think you need any suggestions from anyone, you have it sorted.
Thank you
Great story
I thought your story was well written and developed. It had great build up and I can't wait to read the second part of the story. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
Wow, very hot
Very nice, slow build up and perfect ending.
An amazing first start ....
It has been a real treat finding this one. Thank you for all the effort and time in sharing this with us. It is always more of a 'tease' trying to guess how much of it is the real part and what, if anything, you have added to make the story flow as it does. That is for you to know and leave us the readers to wonder - which just adds to the quality of the piece.
The panties part is so reminiscent of my own time at home when I used to take my mum's underwear and wank into them before putting them back! I also used like her silky feel bras as well. But unfortunately nothing else ever happened like it did in your story.
I am now going to read the second part but I hope that all of this feedback will encourage you to keep sharing your writing - please!!!
After all these scores of comments, with many more coming...
what I have to say may well seem superfluous, but...Your story was simply superb! It ranks with a small handful of stories of son-into-mom fucking, very possibly the best of the lot. That's because of the flawlessly literate phrasing, the perfect pace, and the sheer excitement of the hot action. By the way, I love Mark's use of "mommy." It recreates the warm intimacy of the little boy and his beloved mother in a world all their own. For me, it connotes his mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between his mother's legs that her darling baby boy came into the world from, his own birth canal. Like lots of boys, Mark is in thrall to his mother's incomparable cunt. He loves everything about it: the feel, the taste, the rich aroma. For Mark, like for plenty of sons, they're the best things he can ever feel, taste, and inhale, deeply. Both Mark and his mother understand that her mommy-hole is the receptacle nature provides for her boy's stiff young prick and for all the great doses of creamy semen he's got waiting for his loving mother in his young balls. When a boy blows his balls up between his mother's legs, gives her a great big twatful of his foaming sperm, and mom cums like crazy, it's the perfect love and the perfect lust coming together. This story is a classic, and words aren't adequate to commend Lindat817.
Thank You
I read this story some time ago and couldn't stop thinking about it. I have also been suspicous that my son has been "borrowing" my panties and - I confess - found it arousing. I finally worked up the nerve to tell my best friend about him taking my panties and her reaction was similar to your friend in the story. That is where the similarity ends between my real life and your story... at least for now. I don't know that I will ever have the gumption to act on it - but your story is a work of art. It has been my release and I have vicariously lived through your actions. I truly think it is the best story on the site. Thank you for writing it in such a beautiful, loving way.
What a fantastic story, I still love feeling and sniffing other womens worn panties and this story had me cumming more than once as I was reading. I hope you will write more about Mark and Tom and their respective mothers.
One of the best ever. Please continue posting stories.
HOLY SHIT
Please keep writting ! Iloved the start the middle an the ending that was so exciting I was starting to shake You sure know how to spin a yawn (You are good)
Please continue with this story
This is maybe the best story I have ever read
Good stuff
If this was a first effort, I can hardly wait for the second.
The only distraction was the over use of "as well", where "too" or "also" could have been used.
Other than that WELL DONE!
Linda's Discovery Ch. 01
This story, as the writer/author admits, is her first effort--at least on Literotica. Now, knowing she has admirally provided us incest lovers, followers and readers with another sequel, chapter 02, I reluctantly am withholding my analysis of this chapter until I've finished the next follow-up to this very charming, sensual and loving story. After I finish the next chapter, in the comments, I will make my thoughts and feelings ot the full story known.
Briefly, I will offer that this stanza is written by someone with some intimate knowledge of the subject matter of the incest genre of written literature. You, the writer, have done a remarkedly superb rendering of a most worthy subject, mother and son love. My self, being male, speak from the perspective of a father and daughter affair that, unfortunately, has yet to develop to the stage your "fantasy" has; however, hope springs eternal--each day brings new adventures!!!
Oh my fucking god!
I think I'm about to cum! Oh, god yes!!
Fucking absolutely awesome!!! Way better than a movie!!
One of my favorites ....
You are a very good writer why didn't you write a part 2?
Would love to hear more about Linda a d her son Mark!
Wellllll ..... I thought I looked before I wrote ....
But obviously i didn't .... It's great to see you wrote a part 2
Mommy Linda is a very sexy woman!!!
Linda and her son, with her determination, got to loving and fucking like a lot of family members would give anything to be doing; often and long!! Hopefully Annie and son Tom are in part 2! It was her idea about Linda's panties in her son' clothes afterall!
Excellent descriptions about mutual masturbation over the phone and pure genious to include Annie during a call talking to Mark about fucking and Tom eager to fuck his mom, too!!
Very Very Good
Thank you Linda:
I truly enjoyed part one and now I'm off to read part two.
K&L,
Bob
BRAVA, Lindat817!!!
When I used to teach English I constantly emphasized the importance of specificity in descriptive writing. If an erotic writer takes the time to describe sexual encounters in rich detail, the reader's pleasure is greatly intensified. So thank you, Linda, for a story that is as beautifully written as it is exciting! I'm looking forward to Chapter 02.
Maybe some editing?
Okay tale, but it sure seemed too long. Too much of the blah, blah, blah.
Bravo!
Enjoyed it a great deal. I was very, very turned on by it. Although I have read some critcism in the comments, I for one feel quite content reading it in the manner presented. I assume you aren't looking for a pulitzer, rather fulfilling a need to excite and be excited. I know you have excited me. I hope you have garnered the same satisfaction yourself. Well done Linda817. I am moving on to read part two.
Thanks.
Wonderful
Incredible story. I wouldn't change a word of it.
Perfect
I understand this story completely and absolutely, every emotion, every sensation. Thanks for bringing my own feelings to such wonderful heights
Sorry Madame..
Naive and excessively puritanical Stendhal, mixed with the same naive and exalted Balzac's - and it's all 'watered' sauce of modern porn.
Only the last - 5 page worth 4 pts ('I had promised myself that I was not going to let my own son fuck me'..??? - Sorry M'me, but.. more naive than Stendhal and Balzac put together .. ).
The rest is in the range 2 points ..
From me.. 3 'gwiazdki' ('Liked It, Keep On Writing').
Good luck!!
great story
I really loved this story.
Wonderfully written!!
Such talent and erotic language! Please write more and disregard the negative jealousy.
First attempt?
Incredible. Enjoyed every word of it. Stories written from the female perspective are my favorites, and this is one of the best. Many thanks. I haven't allowed myself to cum yet.....but am leaking profusely. quite tasty......off I go to chapter 2
Loved it
Loved the story. So nice to read it from a woman's perspective. Need more of that
terrific
loved it-great build-up, hot sex, nice people-great descriptions-nicely written-thanks
Oh yes
I second all the positive comments before mine. Incest is my favorite fetish, and you have done it superbly.
Susan
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