All Comments on 'Linda's Discovery'

Can't wait for part 2.

Great story - really well paced, guiding us to a hot climax with the prospect of more to cum.

Can't belive this is really the first one you have written - maybe just the first on this site - any which way looking forward to many more.

Encore!!!

Thanks for your hard work and please don't wait too long for the next part!!

This is a favorite fantasy of mine also. Glad you got to live out at least part of your fantasy. I'm envious.

Loved your story and really liked the phone sex can not wait for the next chapter this could really turn into something fantastic mother son, best friend and her son, mother and friend, sons switch places it could go on forever even the fathers getting in on the act with the boys girls total fuck fest

That was one of the hottest stories i've ever read. The build-up with the panties and the phone sex had me wetter than i've been in a long time. I can't wait for you to continue this and to see where they go, not just with each other but with Anne and Tom as well.

Thank you for the well written and very erotic tory. You've taken a tried and rather old theme (son stealing mom's panties)of which there too many stories, and breathed new life into it. I really liked the little care package mom sent to her son and the ensuing phonesex both which made the story. You have talent for writing hot and realistic stories please write some more of this saga and any other fantasies you care to indulge in.

Linda, one waits a long time to find such an incredibly erotic debut! Brilliantly constructed story with a new twist on an old theme - you certainly breathed new life into the Mom's panties concept. You write lovely - searingly hot prose and arousingly hot dialogue. Looking eagerly forward to your next!

I liked it, but too many "Mommys'" in it nobody says Mommy that many times when they're talking to their Mom never mind fucking them.

Many mother's make the same discovery and choose to ignore it. It is better to address the behavior. The proper training of sons can have great benefits. keep writing . stay real

This story had an element of tenderness and love which is sometimes lacking here. The initiation through phone sex was believable and the buildup to the final act felt real. Very well done. I look forward to the next part.

5*

Wicked Hot.

I need to trade in my mother for one like you.....

Can not wait for her friend story.

That's just incredibly well written. And smokin', smokin' hot. (But I do agree w/ the comment about too many "mommy"s.)

A very hot story and unlike my colleagues, the fact that there are two mothers/sons in the story makes it even hotter.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Forget about the mommie comments. The are part of the story and frankly, add to the intimacy. This is one of the best written stories on this site. Keep up the fine work and please continue as soon as you can.

Awesome! Can't wait for more. I just hope there isn't any Mum swapping or sharing in the future.

Thank you for a truly erotic story. I almost felt like I was eavesdropping on the whole story it felt so real and erotic.

Can't wait for the continuation and hope it includes Annie and Tom.

I look forward to many more of your stories.

Well done.....

Exceptionally well written and incredibly hot. Can't wait for more.

Great story from start to finish.

is right!

Oh my! What an amazing debut. Credible and fantastic suspense with the discovery and phone build-up. Part of what made it so hot was your initial comment that it was partly based on actual events. There has to be more to this tale and I for one cannot wait to see the next installment from real events or your imagination. Thanks so much for this story!

Hi, i'm from the Netherlands and ik like your story very much. Nicely writen, and very very hot, thanks for it, love to read more.

...and to the highest standards in this, a controversial category.

You certainly captured some nuance in me that I didn't know I had.

I mean, I never thought about sex with my own mom, but your writing brings out the best about the IDEA of incest being so inviting, forbidden, taboo, yet so loving that it should be a natural desire to be seduced by the one who raised you.

WOW!

That was one of the hottest stories in years. PLEASE write a second chapter.

Hot and saucy!

Just break up your paragraphs for easier reading.

You are a hell of a writer. I was captivated from the beginning to the end. There isn't any bad part in your story. The phone sex was so hot especially with the best friend in the room.

Keep writting because I'm a fan now.

That's a great first story. I hope you'll write more.

I hated to see it end. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I initially started reading this story just before going to bed for a quick relief....an hour later and I have enjoyed every word! And want more

Very seldom are we treated to a first-effort story with the power and the heat that this one contained. Others have already commented on the fresh spin to an age-old theme, with the son 'using' Mom's panties. But, usually, such stories have placed the confrontation immediately after the discovery. Your switch, letting the issue stew a little while Mom fantasized, was a welcome freshness in such a tale. It also (together with the rather unique phone-sex) allowed the "stew" to really simmer, gathering heat and flavor that seldom show up in such a tale!

I'm going to side with the "anti- 'Mommy'" group, though. The vast majority of boys stop using "Mommy" somewhere around ages ten to twelve, simply because they desire to appear more "grown up" and "Mommy" is the term of endearment that a child would use. I certainly can't picture any adult male uttering "Mommy" in the midst of shagging his mother. As far as the Mother's own "self-reference", "Mom", or perhaps "Mama" or "Momma" would sound alright.

I'm looking forward to the next portion of this story, but I really hope that there won't be any swapping of partners, since it's fairly clear that the relationship being built here is based in love, as well as lust, and swapping would be more a degrading of that relationship.

This has to be one of the best and hottest stories in this classification, and this is shown in the number of comments that it has gathered in just a few days. Congratulations on a great effort, well plotted, and written with style and accuracy. A fantastic first effort

That was incredibly hot, and as said before, the lust/passion was simmering to a boiling point. Five pages, and even when there was no sexual activity it was interesting. Personally as a man I don't think the 'mommy' thing was unrealistic. I have one or two friends who have engaged in sex with their mom and they say the use of the term in bed is hot, outside, it helps stir the sexual tension. Wouldn't know, I haven't tried to fuck my mom. Don't care to either. Despite how hot the mother/son thing is, if I'm going to fuck a family member it would have to be my cousin. She's 26 with a slim body, curved in the right places and I'd wager at 32C for cup size.

But that isn't the point.

My point is that you're an amazing erotic writer, if the public wasn't so close minded on incest stories, I'd say you could turn this into a mini book series once you continue.

I'll be completely honest and tell you that I came while reading this, my cock was semi hard through most of it and got harder as it progressed. I had to re-read it three or four times before I could cum though - it's the drawback on having such great stamina, not being able to get in a quickie, masturbation wise or fuck wise - but when I did it was thoroughly enjoyable.

I give this story a five out of five stars and can't wait to see the next part!

P.S. I hope to see Tom and Annie in the next one, as well. Poor woman should get her fantasy fulfilled too!

I can't believe that's your first tale. Too hot.

Hi, just finished reading your story. Damn good for a first timer. My only complaint is that it went on for a bit too long. However, for a prose story the length would have been perfect for a short story. But then you'd have to take out the sex, and where would that leave us? Nothing to play about.

In any event I will be watching for your next story!

Thank you

T

Well mommy that was fantastic and the top incest story I have read you must have been oozing yourself when yo wrote this and wouls to have your wet panties to my nosr and tongue

Very well orchestrated. Development of characters and storylines was great. You have left yourself -- and your readers -- with plenty of places to go. Looking forward to Vol 2.

Jesus!!! That was an incredible story and to think it was a true story! That's soooo hot!! I've got incest stories but none with my mommy

I came like 4 times reading this lol great story and thank you (out of all the stories I've read this is the first I posted a comment for amazing )

I know you have received many positive comments and would just like to add one more. Terrific story, plot and character development and amazing subject matter. Congratulations and I am sure we are all looking forward to the continuation.

Really really amazing!!! Well built up and very very hot!! Actually something we can all picture happening! I wonder where real life ended and fantasy began?!?

Stories that are hot aren't always well written. And well written stories aren't always hot. But this one, is BOTH. SO well done! (Favorite'd!)

Some other commenters have said there's an overuse of the word "Mommy..." I sort of agree, but on the other hand, I'd imagine with some young men, who are lucky enough to get to fuck their Mom, might shift and get caught up in the moment and might keep using the word. The mind is in a different place when it's turned-on.

Anyway, awesome story! I can't wait to read more!

Thanks Linda. Great Story. My only suggestion would be to build the story a little more slowly. We went from a normal mother son relationship to intercourse just a bit too quickly from my perspective. Still, it must have been good as my pants felt tight while I was reading. Looking forward to more of your stories.

I loved ur detailed xplanation...as well as the story itslf :) My request wud b to continue this story...

w8ng fr d nxt installment... :)

The divorce occurred at about twelve years of age (read puberty), Dad lost touch quickly (read story), Mommy becomes only parent figure and great closeness develops (read story), Mommy provides example of what it means to be an adult, is able to talk to him about it, even in sexual language, so in sexually charged moments he is comfortable enough with her to call her," Mommy". Linda you got it right!!! In fact, reading your bio, I'm guessing you even lived it that way.

What's it going to be like when your son discovers this story? Or is it like that already?

Very hot indeed - nicely built

Linda, I completely enjoyed your story Like Mark, as a young teenager, I used to fantasize about making love to my mom. It is funny I remember the struggle I went through when I stopped calling my parents mommy and daddy. Now, calling mom mommy seems really sexy even though I am now a younger AARP community member.

I used to masturbate with her slips and nightgowns and even wore her nylon stockings as part of my erotic sexual fantasy. I would live for the time of day when I could be alone and rub these silky items across my swollen prick. The problem was the pre-cum stains and often not being able to control my ejaculation. I would shoot cum all over her lingerie and then scurry to clean up my love juices. I always worried she would see the stain, but could hardly wait until the next day, when I could repeat the scene again.

I would often take her undergarments to my bedroom, jerk off and then rush to return them before mommy returned home.

I so enjoyed your account of you and Mark and Anne and her son Tom. Your story completely captured my feelings and dreams, just like you and Mark. However, I was never able to either actually fuck my mommy or even masturbate with her.

I love the conversation you and Anne had and I was especially fascinated with the lesbian past you revealed to Mark and Anne. I loved the Linda/Mark phone call, with Anne as the secret observer - Now that was HOT!

I liked the romantic dinner no sex, just set the stage for what followed. Dinner made what followed a natural part of the evening - I call it indirect foreplay. The masturbation together, then the fucking the next morning was indeed arousing brought me to climax.

I liked your use of words like dick, cock, pussy, especially cunt I liked the phrases: I did not want to make love, I wanted to fuck. There are times when I make love and then there are other times when I also want to fuck and use all the dirty words because they are erotic to me.

Also, I appreciate your use of vocabulary and grammar. Some Literotica writers need to take some grade school English and Grammar classes before they ever write another word. Your professional career is reflected in your writing.

I might add that I have two grown/married daughters, but I never fantasized about sex with them in fact, I get a little sick thinking about incest with my daughters... But I had no problem with my mom and I getting it on in my mind. It is similar to lesbians turning me on, but two guys together is a turn off. Mom and me, yes, but my dad and I, never, as my daughters and I...

Linda, thanks for sharing. Your story brought back many wonderful memories and many fantasies that never got past mental imagery. I am anxious to read part two and hope that you will have time to share more!

Linda, this story was simply put one of the best mom/son stories I have ever read. I have not made it to chapter 2 yet as I need privacy at home to read this but will definitely try to get to it quickly.

Six stars if they are allowed

Wonderful story and characters. Well written and it felt very real. Thank you.

hot and very sexy

Great story!! It was very intense and extreamly erotic. I can't wait to ree the next the chapter and all the other stories you have written. I loved the dirty talk between the two of them and that Annie was able to hear some of it.

Keep it up and keep me up.

I am so wet from your story, thank you so much for sharing with us. I love how the story progressed to total fulfillment, I am jealous....hehe

I look forward to chapter 2 once i cum and relax with my own glass of wine......

Super!!

This is outstanding. Maybe the best to be posted. If this is your first, I will certantly look forward to the next.

Very gd. Do it again...

WOW!

These two sections of Linda's Discovery is the best I've ever read on Lit, and I've read them all in the last two years.

Thanks Linda.

Fulfills all my fantasies and how I hoped my mother felt. Can't wait to continue.

This should be made into a movie

Really nothing

Simply Awesome

This was a truly beautiful story! Their love for each other expressed physically was simply marvelous!

Quite possibly the hottest thing I've ever read ! Fantastic work of art! Thank you so very much!

just want 2 say thx linda, hope u continue 5* going 2 read number 2 now mmmmmmmm

Absolutely super fucking hot. Your writing skills are admirable. Your ability to build to the inevitable climax is a rarity. Don't torture your readers. Keep writing!

This is without a doubt one of the sexiest stories I've ever read on this site! I was hard the whole time I read it! Excellent!

Dear goddess this story to me is just too superb in its use of descriptive wording, And im not afraid to say this but ive shown this story to several women in the past two months (14 to be exact), and each time it ended with a vigorous fuck and a massive orgasmic rush to beat all. And yes my mum and sister were in that group of women, Lindat817 You are a goddess among authors.

wow this story was amazing, made me relive a part of my past except with my sister, thankyou Linda for the most erotic evening in a longtime :)

Would like this to happen for me, yummy. I adore my handsome boys. Keep writing.

Took me three orgasms to reach the end of this story. Can't wait to recover, get hard again and read the next part.

Great story enjoyed reading it.... Wish I had a mom like you...

Oh, Linda! What a wonderful discovery your are. It has been a long time since I have read such well crafted erotica. I am nearly breathless. There are some very fine writers here - and I know they will appreciate your challenge. We all will benefit, in many ways, from your splendid contribution.

Great story, and unlike most of the stories on this site, it was believable. I enjoyed it immensely.

This is one of the hotest I have read. Mother son love takes me back to my own youth.

fantastic .............cld cum twice in a GO . lol

Probably the best written and hottest I have ever read from this very sensitive genre of stories. Excellent story development to a mind blowing O!!! More please.

what a story.... wish that would have happened to me!

I really got stimulated by it.

I look forward to the next one

simply the best in a long time. Compliments!!!!!!

Loved it...always wanted to fuck my mom...!!!!

What a story and build up, very easy to read and believe. It was fantastic when the three of us cum at the same time :) Looking now for chapter 2 and sorry I can only give it a 5 rating instead of a 10 it deserves.

That is the hottest and best experience I have ever had. Truly super.

Wow, great stimulating believable story. Thanks for great writing.

Loved the story, the build up, the entire web involving the friend and her son, offering greater potential within the follow up themes, beautifully written

I love the way the story goes, specially the sniffing of the Mom's panties,

Hope you make a story about How a female soldiers panties smell like when they are deployed.

I was on lit, reading comments on my own work and decided to scroll through the hall of fame and happened upon yours. I can say, after reading it twice that it belongs there! You have such a talent for erotic word play and building tension. I plan to email you directly to talk more about it but for now I'll just finish by saying that I was left breathless. It ended with "to be continued...". Please! Continue!

I read this because my husband told me to, it had me wet from start to finish! Afterwards my hubby and I played this out....Best fuck I have ever had. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

i cudnt resist myself from stroking hard each time linda got horny.lindas a great mom..mark is a terrific son..the horniest story ever.

Mom / Son interludes are so close to my heart. It should be no surprise that mom's panties will always hold a special place in every boyz awakening. I know, personally, Linda's account has "awakened" again that most alluring of taboo's.

thanks mommy

Jack

u22u2@yahoo.com

when i was 16 my aunt fuck me i had a 9 inch cock i am 43 now and my wife and i still fuck her she is 62 now i love watching her lick my wifes cunt out and then i cum over them both if any one want to watch put your email and i will get back yo you

Thanks Linda..Great story..Looking forward to seeing more from you.

KEEP IT CUMMING!

Anonymous who claimed he has sexual intercourse with his Aunt when he was young, and still doing it when she is 62, you're fucked up and sick in the head. See a fucking doctor. This story is absurd, in which I actually believe is based on true events, putting aside the fact that the author said it was.

Incest or incestuous acts is wrong, on so many occasions. It is against religious law and law of the state (most countries). "I am growing up and need panties to sniff, who cares if its my mums" basically sums up a portion of the story. That is not an excuse to explain sexual purposes. You're son Linda has a sick fucking mind, and you are even worse to excessively encourage it.

That is a being you created with your husband, and you have a personal relationship with him involving sexual intercourse? A mother is supposed to be the most important caring provider she can be for her children, not another hole for a male, especially if its your son. Incest is disgusting, and will gradually be disgusting to myself and the other 99% of the fucking world. You and everyone else here, need immediate fucking help.

It is in a section called "Incest/Taboo". One would suppose one would know what one's getting. So why would you come on an erotic story site, read an erotic story about incest, and then condemn how evil incest is? Makes no sense to me. If you really want to debate the issue, get a name and stop posting anonymously. An anonymous rant is just a rant. No one will pay attention.

WOW what a fantastic hot horny story . they dont get any better .

reading i was there watching it taking place if not in body but there in mind.

the writing of this was brilliant has to be the best story on lliterotica or any other site the best more please more of linda's discovery .

Excellent build up and drive to the actual climax. One of the best stories I have read and well thought out. Loved the introduction of Anne and her son. Leaves a lot of options for the future. Keep writing you are very talented.

Vriesea

the pacing, the story, the heat of this story are all wonderful... it is amazing and as another commenter said, one of the best. thank you for sharing, it's one to repeat, over and over.

I agree with JM1 about the anonymous comment, sounds like a sicko getting his kicks then getting all sad and sorry he did it. I think the story by Linda was very erotic and really enjoyed it. Very well written with a sense of passion. Thank you Linda.