A great story, and a sexy provocateur, but as stated, the spelling and grammar detract a lot. Maybe consult a proof reader if it's not your strong suit, but keep writing!
by
Anonymous09/10/12
delicious ass fucking
that was to much, got me so wet , i'm petite 5'2'' , my ex was 6'4'' with a gigantic monster pole of a cock nearly 9 ' he always wanted to fuck me in the ass , ooohhh my sweet little bubbly ass, but i always did say no, until like her i wanted to make him feel great , i was so afraid , afraid of the pain , he took is time the first time and fill my ass full of is thick seed , keep fucking to push it all the way up my pleasure spot
he was so right , i fucking love it in the ass , i wanted it all the time , got him to fuck me in the morning deep so DEEP in my ass , and make sure he did it again in the evening at least twice i loved falling asleep my ass completely fuck , i stop watching tv i was a ass fuck slut ; i'm still his more then ever an ass slut , i miss it so much i use this big dildo in my ass all the time , and when i will get the right prince , i will reward him with the best thing in life , ass fucking , thank you for that story , i"m fucking myself in the ass with my trustee dildo and coming and coming again OMG
OOOMMMMGGGGG
by
Anonymous05/22/13
Loved it
Not only were the sex scenes hot, but I loved how you showed how much they meant to each other and how you expressed her love for her significant other as well. It made me think of my husband the entire time. Very well written!
English
Not bad
I liked this story but the errors in grammer and spelling was distracting.
Potential
A great story, and a sexy provocateur, but as stated, the spelling and grammar detract a lot. Maybe consult a proof reader if it's not your strong suit, but keep writing!
delicious ass fucking
that was to much, got me so wet , i'm petite 5'2'' , my ex was 6'4'' with a gigantic monster pole of a cock nearly 9 ' he always wanted to fuck me in the ass , ooohhh my sweet little bubbly ass, but i always did say no, until like her i wanted to make him feel great , i was so afraid , afraid of the pain , he took is time the first time and fill my ass full of is thick seed , keep fucking to push it all the way up my pleasure spot
he was so right , i fucking love it in the ass , i wanted it all the time , got him to fuck me in the morning deep so DEEP in my ass , and make sure he did it again in the evening at least twice i loved falling asleep my ass completely fuck , i stop watching tv i was a ass fuck slut ; i'm still his more then ever an ass slut , i miss it so much i use this big dildo in my ass all the time , and when i will get the right prince , i will reward him with the best thing in life , ass fucking , thank you for that story , i"m fucking myself in the ass with my trustee dildo and coming and coming again OMG
OOOMMMMGGGGG
Loved it
Not only were the sex scenes hot, but I loved how you showed how much they meant to each other and how you expressed her love for her significant other as well. It made me think of my husband the entire time. Very well written!
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