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Freight Train to Morning

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by twelveoone10/15/11

Well hello

High point
Womb of morning coffee

Most of the ends are too expected
does there come a time
when it’s all done and said?

but having little hope,

connecting the same dots,

as if the dots are connected for me

but I gave it a five

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